Living In Pain... Dying For A Dark Love...

All of my poems are about death, suicide, love, vampires.. I'd b so thankful if the people who read my poems left a comment about them.. so that I could have an idea if my work is good enough.. thnx
Death surrounds me in every corner
Can feel its presence even in my sleep
It's going to take me sooner or later
Because the pain I hold inside is so fucking deep

Hypocrisy and lies rein in the world I live in
Rather live in hell than up here
Always living my life like it was a kind of sin
Staying alive was never my wish... because of death I have no fear!

Waiting for too long to watch my last breath
In a blink of an eye all became so quiet
Just me, a picture of you and death
In that moment thinking of you, my dark angel, was something I couldn't help it

Death took me and for that I'm glad
I hope you know that you were the only angel I met
And it was for you I just died, but please don't be sad
I promise I'll be waiting for you when you die too but not yet... not yet
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