My Last Sky

All of my poems are about death, suicide, love, vampires.. I'd b so thankful if the people who read my poems left a comment about them.. so that I could have an idea if my work is good enough.. thnx
Wondering every day
What's the point of my existence
Don't care what people say
I know I've got a suicidal tendency

Waiting for death
Like the sky waits for the moon
Just wishing for my last breath
And for darkness to take me soon

A razorblade will make my wish come true
But if I want a painful last thought
I just think of you
Because my world is full of tragedies thanks to what you've brought

All of your fake smiles
All the pain you put me through
Made me walk in this living hell for endless miles
And made me weaker inside too

The cold night is coming
I'm ready to bleed to death and say goodbye
As I look up and the stars are shining
Knowing that this will be my last sky…

By André Ribeiro
Published: 9/5/2006		 Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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