Sea Of Darkness

All of my poems are about death, suicide, love, vampires.. I'd b so thankful if the people who read my poems left a comment about it.. so that I could have an idea if my work is good enough.. thnx
My darkest fears are haunting me
Cutting me like a sharp knife
No one's here to see
That death is slowly taking my life

Feelin' like buried alive by everyone that knows me
Alone I cry in my grave
No one's here to see
That I cannot be saved

I stare at my reflection, at my very own enemy
It shows me eyes full of darkness
No one's here to see
That my life is becoming lifeless

Can't stand my growing misery
Living like I am dying
No one's here to see
That I am drowning...
In the sea of darkness
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