The Suicide Note

This poem is very special to me because me and my best friend wrote it together and it was the first time either of us did something like this. It is about a girl who loves a boy and he loves her too then he goes off and stops loving her and loves someone else and so she ends her life…you’ll see.
I’m sorry for all the sh*t I ever said,
I wish I could take them back, But soon I will be dead.
Threw all the things that happened,
You dug your way in my heart,
I wish I never met you,
For you tore my heart apart.
You made me think you loved me,
But now I see you won’t,
My life will soon be ending, I wish you cared but you don’t,
When I have my awakening will you even be there,
Will you show any emotion will you even care.
You’re hurting my soul with cuts so deep,
You’ve killed me inside so silently I weep.
If my heart could cry like the tears in my eyes,
They’d fill up the oceans so deep and wide.
This pain is unbearable you’ve torn me in two,
I barely loved anyone you were one of the few.
My wrists they bleed, my visions they fade,
My eyes grow heavy, everything goes gray.
Now crimson blood drizzles down my wrists,
You’re dead in my eyes with one final slit.
You are my grave, I hope my tombs lies in your heart.
IVE LOVED YOU TILL THE END, AND EVER SINCE THE START!

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By Amanda douglass
Published: 8/23/2006		 Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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