Physical Pain Takes Away the Emotional

This poem is about a girl who's experienced a death & she can't take it. [FYI - this is my 1st time writing - hope you like it :) ]
Runs up to her room.
blue eyes fill up with tears
black eye liner running
down her face.
pulls out the case.
inside lies a pain reliever.
she thinks the physical
takes away the emotional.
makes a cut.
R I P
your death did this to me.

By Holly Everett
Published: 7/19/2005 		Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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