Deception

I’m kind of a beginning poem writer. I take things out of my own life and twist them up a bit. Comment please…
You came with me
And I let you in.
I told you my secrets about him.
You knew I liked him
I thought he liked me.
I should have noticed
What was going on
I just met you
But now I see the deception
I saw you that night
Right by the pool
Under the stars
He was outside
Then you went out.
I slowly followed
And saw you talking
You leaned in
And started making out
I was hypnotized for a second
Then I silently walked back crying
I killed myself that night.
Did you even notice?
If I had to bet
I would guess not.
Hope your life was happy.
Remember who loved him first....

By Brittany Hall
Published: 7/18/2006		 Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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