Razor Sharp Death

This is a poem I wrote after my boyfriend lied to me and I was really upset. Instead of cutting I decided to write a poem to describe how I felt. I hope everyone likes it…
My tears they fall like razor sharp blades that cut thru my wrist as I’m screaming you're name

My blood falls from the wounds on my wrist and spills all over the floor

My life is draining from me and all I can think of is what we could have had....

My life is fading I’m falling fast my blood is pouring but you could give a rats ass!!!!!

I cry my life away with all that’s been said I still love you and wish you still did too!!!!

By Ashley Cutcher
Published: 6/8/2006 		Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
 
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