If You Want

Just to tell you people I did not at all write this. My friend Seth wrote this and so I decided to let the rest of the world read his work because I think it is good…
If you want to tell me I am ugly, I already know,
Lack of self-esteem isn't pretty, how low can I go?
I don’t do drugs to patch up the pain,
I keep the question "am I insane",
I am a ghost, quiet, un-noticed.
My eyes on the crucifix,
I remain focused,
Such a sacrifice, to give up a life.
My darling I love you, my beautiful knife,
You burn right through me, with no mistakes,
I keep you worn, for my emotional sake,
Born into sorrow, life is a chore.
Give my life for the unborn morrow,
In which you wait,
I am nevermore,
The unbeating heart will never again break;
Now that there is nothing there for you to take

By amanda brown
Published: 5/15/2006 		Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
 
What should we tell him?
yes, he should join us poets
he has talent and should be noticed
needs more practice
maybe he needs to see a doctor (you know the one)
he is talented
he should pretend he never wrote this
tell him
Don't tell him
yes
no
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