My Angel Tear...

Hope you like.. Its for a girl that the man he loved hurt her.. plzz read it and plzz leave a comment... thanks.
I’m lying her in the dark because you left me all alone..

I’m crying and trying..

But every tear that falls down its death's step..

And u r not here to hug me and tell me its alright..

U left me here all alone and cold..

But death's coming..

My blood now is cold..

My eyes r now closed..

And with my last breath I’d say ..''goodbye.. I’ve loved you..''

My dead soul now its all over .. and with my angel tear , your smile , my grace..

By death angel
Published: 4/30/2006

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sucks - kill yourself - it's the worst I have ever read
what's the point?
ok- needs work
good - I have read better ones
amazing! love it - it's one of the best I have ever read - continue the good job
amazing! love it - it's the best I have ever read!! - continue the good job
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