Good Bye

This was one of my first dark poems I had written and you are the first people to read it. My friends say it is too dark.
I say good bye with a tear in my eye
I cut never enough to kill just enough to feel
Saying good bye is too hard to say so let me show you I
Mean it when I say good bye one cut two
Life fading away
3 cut 4 I fall to the floor
Now I’m saying good bye
With a tear in my eye so here it
Goes for the last time
Good bye and good night.

By Barbara Mather
Published: 2/21/2006 		Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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Is the poem too dark?
Yes
No
No such thing as too drak
it's good but dark
I don't like the dark stuff
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