Sweet Embrace

This is a poem that a friend of mine. I read it and thought it was really good. It doesn’t have death in it but it gets depressing in the end. I take absolutely no credit for the poem.
The morning rose she blooms at dawn
The costly beauty she soon is gone
The loved she lost so fast it's done
The love she hopes her number one
Her hope she flies back to her home
To where love once flourished
She holds her love dear
Don't ever let me go just let me be here in your arms
Take me as I am and let my being run free to be
With you and you alone
Sweet embrace let me hold your strength with me
Sweet love let your charms run free
Daring entanglement with your love let me go
Daring love you are all I know
Hated embrace release me at once
Hated love has turned to the happiness once the fruit of the hunts
Lonesome embrace love has left
Lonesome love has left me where I wept
Empty soul I wander alone
Empty life I painfully moan
Broken heart hear me now
Broken now, forever alone I vow
To be eternally with only myself
Put my love life on the shelf

By jenn lasky
Published: 1/14/2006 		Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
Read Comments (4) 
Should Chonoa (the poet) continue? Was it good?
keep going, you may get better
good poem, continue
save us the trouble of skipping the poems and quit
I love the poem but I think you've had your fill
yeas and good/ok
no and bad
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