The Vampire Within You

This is my 123rd poem! Enjoy!!
Comments on article "The Vampire Within You"
Name Views and CommentsDate
Starr Wow..what can i say it ricks! 4/9/2007
Amanda Ferguson I've been ok. been better, been worse. 3/5/2007
ZD's friend how have you been? 2/15/2007
me so haha??? my god, that is o s h i t for 123, why brag about how many, like we are supposed to care!!! how crap, continue to wish you were dead! 2/15/2007
rianna umm yea i like vampires but they are not bad.. they are not even real.. like dracula wasnt even real.. god. ppl 1/17/2007
black rose oookkkk then 1/17/2007
delke eh not bad not ur best 7/13/2006
SereneNightmare OMG!!! Vampire poem!!! I freakin love this! Thank u!!! side note: I'm pretty obsessed with vampires. lol. ~giggles~ 6/6/2006
Amanda Ferguson does that mean terrible or good? 5/17/2006
? For your 123rd poem this is really really really bad! 5/15/2006
Josh Crrigan Omg i love your poem its like the black pit in my soul. 4/26/2006
deathgirl yeah okey i git it it's good 123rd keep it up 4/26/2006
Amanda Ferguson yes, bye for now. ok 4/25/2006
ZD's friend Well, goodbye for now. I will be checking the forum every day for the next couple of weeks. Bye.

R.I.P Zachary Deitrick
4/25/2006
Amanda Ferguson no, its ok hardly anyone has left a comment so im ok with it. i will contact you if i need anything. 4/25/2006
ZD's friend It is no problem, I did it because he asked me to. If you need anything else please post in the message board. I did not mean to take over your comment page. Sorry. The message board is under peotry then the lost poet. 4/25/2006
Amanda Ferguson wow. im sorry you had to explain it all to me, so thank you. now i know why i havent heard from him in a while. 4/25/2006
ZD's friend I hate to say it but no one knows why. He just did it. He was very very well known in this town. He played soccer and baskertball on the varcity teams. So no one really knows.The only thing left behind was his note that said what he wanted me and some others to do. 4/25/2006
Amanda Ferguson i have read all of his poetry on this website. i like it only because that is the stuff i write about and ive come so close but my friend stopped my from comitting suicide. i only wish someone could have stopped him. do you have any clue why he did what he did? 4/25/2006
ZD's friend The funeral is in Toldeo, Ohio, and everyone feels the same way you do about it. I myself have just read his poems yesterday and I didn't even know that he thought this way. He writes many different poems love, fantacy, the clouds, rain, anything but I never heard these ones on here, and im guessing that there are more somewhere. We did find a few though. 4/25/2006
Amanda Ferguson i was just starting to get to know him. we got along great, i was a major poetry fan of hiis. he was also a fan of mine. i never would have thought he would do that, everytime we left comments on here or emailed; he came across like he was happy...... we would have been good friends....
where is the funeral?
its ok....
4/25/2006
ZD's friend It was on a note that was on his bed. He just said to tell you that he was sorry, among other things. His funeral is next week if you want I can say something for you? There is a commemeration to him in the message boards. If you want me to say something during the veiwing post it there please. I'm sorry. 4/25/2006
Amanda Ferguson ..........i dont know what to say...........
thank you for telling me....
4/25/2006
ZD's friend I'm Sorry about that date it was the 17th not the 27th, thank you. 4/25/2006
ZD's friend I'll be checking this site for your response or comments. I'm sorry you had to hear this from me. 4/24/2006
ZD's friend Amanda Ferguson this is one of Zac Deitrick's friends. He left me a note that said different things he wished me to do and one of them was to tell you goodbye. He died on April 27. Apparent Suicide. 4/24/2006
cobriana not bad i don't think this is ur best 4/21/2006
Amanda Ferguson wow. that was definately not in my intentions (making someone cry). its nice that someone can actually relate to my stuff, so thanx for all comments. 4/21/2006
Scorpiogirl That was wonderful. It was so significant to everything that I'm feeling right now. I cried as I read. I really truly did. 4/20/2006
dalton this is an amzing poem 4/20/2006
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