| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| marily |
wow.. tats jus hard 2 read... ii could never imagined what your went through,.. i hate my dad..but he has never hurt my mom like tat .. but ii kno how much it hurts cus to me all the things that my dad tells me don't matter anymore to me all i want is my mom and my sister to be ok. |
7/1/2008 |
| rookie-monster |
that clen and very intresting keep it up fantastic poem!!!!!! |
3/12/2007 |
| sarah d |
i can kinda relate to tha.. b4 i was adopted my birth mom abused,neglected, and abandon me when i was a baby but i got adopted when i was 22 months old. now i have a better life |
2/14/2007 |
| TONYA |
ITS REALLY SAD I WENT THROUGH THE SAME KINDA CHILDHOOD EVENTUALLY MY FATHER KILLED MY MOTHER THEN SHOT HIS SELF. NO CHILD SHOULD HAVE TO GO THROUGH ANYTHING LIKE THAT. |
1/15/2007 |
| caitlin smith |
My adopted dad abused me... in ways no one should ever be abused. be thankful you're getting away... because i never got to. |
9/15/2006 |
| unknown |
i havent seen my dad in 10 years i havent recieved 1 phone call or even a birthday card christmas card or anything great poem thought keep them coming your really talented ur poems are AWESOME!!!!! good luck and please keep up the poetry |
8/15/2006 |
| bec |
that is so good |
7/26/2006 |
| Amanda Ferguson |
Thats extremely good.! my dad left right after i was born. i dont know him or my other two siblings. so i cant say i know how you feel. it was really good though. keep it up!! |
6/12/2006 |
| andrea |
that was a good poem, it's sad that it might be true, but i know how u felt, my dad pulled a gun on my mom, and beet her till shes almost dead, and now my stepmom, but at least i don't have 2 c my mom hurt anymore. |
6/3/2006 |
| tara |
i love this poem |
5/30/2006 |
| <3jaydee |
this is soo sad i think its awsome if u wanna chat add me on msn jaydee_baby@hoti |
5/21/2006 |
| matthew |
this poem i understand for my father was less than a man always abusing my mom |
5/18/2006 |
| Brittany |
WOW !! this poem is really good. |
5/5/2006 |
| anonimus |
I think it is a very well writen poen im doibng it in a contest
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4/29/2006 |
| Danielle |
this is sooo sad! :*( |
4/26/2006 |
| kristain |
i think this poem is great!!!! |
4/24/2006 |
| nick |
that was good |
4/24/2006 |
| bullimc |
It sounds like my mums boyfriend the only difference is she wont leave. |
4/21/2006 |
| slah |
i thought i was good and crative. a good way to get your feelings out. |
4/20/2006 |
| charly |
that reminds me of me actually he always hit my mom and he beat me we moved when i was 6 and everything is better now i dont see him anymore and he never calls so everything is good |
4/18/2006 |
| edogzz |
wow.. absoultley amazing! |
4/17/2006 |