The Model
The story of an artist whose present events are under the influence by the past ones - in centuries ago, which it is unknown for him until tragedy and a mysterious vision reveal it to him.
| Comments on article "The Model" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| LexD |
The Maria comment was funny. The story was good. I enjoyed it. It difficult to read in the beginning |
11/30/2009 |
| Maria Shelly |
Very Very hard to understand
its not enjoyable reading its to complex which makes it to completed even reading |
9/19/2009 |
| Jenny Wayne |
omg GREAT i loved it |
9/19/2009 |
| jamal |
i liked it so much |
1/22/2009 |
| Okay |
I don't typically like to comment on other peoples work, however I must agree with "Zanna". Your grammar and punctuation mishaps throughout this story make it difficult and confusing to get through. Great concept though! I think with some tweaking it could be a great read! Best of luck to you! |
1/7/2009 |
| Interested |
What is the point? I don't get it? What does it all mean? |
12/28/2007 |
| Zanna |
Your grammar definitely needs serious work, and so does your punctuation. I didn't bother to finish reading this story after the first 2 confusing paragraphs. Good luck . |
8/1/2007 |
| maria |
This story was very long but it was very interesting even though I did not read it !!
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4/6/2007 | |
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