| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| LexD |
The main character Larissa never experience heartbreak or any real pain. |
11/27/2009 |
| rtrewt |
rrtyret |
9/19/2009 |
| bindu |
beautifully potrated the story.marvalleous |
5/25/2009 |
| kirsty |
Very selfish way out. Suicide is selfish. A hard lesson the people of the town had to learn? I think not. I hard lesson for any teenager to learn is to not give up. Change friends. Be something other teens wish they could be. Make everyone else admire you not laugh at you. |
5/17/2009 |
| Amie |
awsome...moral of story is what we all miss on...we cannot she the sadness behind the fake smile which some kids put n they wish that at least there loved one would be able to notice it... |
4/8/2009 |
| S |
Omg the stories great keep wrighting |
4/3/2009 |
| tyler |
very good |
3/30/2009 |
| person |
wow you cant write. sorry but go to an english class. |
3/21/2009 |
| Ishy |
That is so nice. Good story! |
2/2/2009 |
| janice |
can i use this in my book and put ur name? |
1/31/2009 |
| saad khan |
Its good and Emotianal...But Reality bites are Pplzz sud discusse it with Parnts and aswell a Such Bright AND intellegent girl...why wud she gave Up her lIfe for a guy just like tat..doesnt make sence to me..still an Average story but the EMOTIONS were well Portraite... |
11/12/2008 |
| Tabz |
Wow absolutely amazing! loved every bit! fantastic 10/10 i wanna write like this! |
10/20/2008 |
| NovelPrincess |
I adored The Girl Who didn't Want to Be, it was really good and the ending 'Just because something is beautiful outside, it doesn’t mean it feels good inside' Was such a strong ending I felt a pang of sadness for a moment. Truly Amazing. |
8/9/2008 |
| Rita |
I thought the story was very good but it made me sad when she jumped off the bridge but I like that story and I think that you should keep writing more |
2/26/2008 |
| Karishma C. |
I really liked this Article from the Bottom of my Heart & I Loved it......! |
2/23/2008 |
| juliana |
awesome omg |
2/16/2008 |
| larrisa |
my name is larrisa |
1/28/2008 |
| alexis |
i love this story it is amazingly good it tells that are very good for young teenagers |
1/10/2008 |
| Stupid Girl |
i think that it is sad how she took her own life
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10/25/2007 |
| Zanna |
The story is interesting, but you need to work on your grammar and form. Run-on sentences, fragments, and sloppy punctuation make for a poor reading experience, and cast a pall over a story that could be very good. Good luck. Writing is a delight and a challenge. May you enjoy it's pleasures and endure through the pain. |
8/1/2007 |
| Carrie |
I'm sorry to say, but I hated this story. A girl commiting suicide because she couldn't have a boyfriend? I need something more creative than that... |
7/5/2007 |
| Larissa |
Hi my names Larissa and i'm 15 (being serious) i liked ur story it remind me of myself and how i wish i could have never been |
2/15/2007 |
| Tan Ying Qian |
this story is very tragic and i feel sad for the little girl in this story she should not have commited suicide but she should try to talk to her parents about it |
1/24/2007 |
| imbued |
good! using it for podcasting |
1/20/2007 |
| Davidoff |
I think,it's very exciting story and before you dicide to do something
you've to think very carefully |
8/25/2006 |
| anonymous |
preach less describe more |
8/19/2006 |
| The One |
yea its good but make it more krazy and sadder its just pretty average like same old! but still good story and wat not |
3/30/2006 |
| Orlagh Ernest |
Jareal what are you talking about this piece is amzing. Obviously you don't know good fiction when it is infront of you. Good luck Sarah xox |
3/5/2006 |
| Tom |
I think this story is amazing |
3/5/2006 |
| jareal |
i think you need to know you need to tell how you feel |
2/26/2006 |
