| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Hayden |
I love it. |
6/9/2008 |
| xxx |
i'm sorry ali |
1/27/2008 |
| Elin |
That is so sad. |
1/20/2008 |
| Ali |
Time heals & your words will fade, when you are old enough to understand the mistakes your Mum made. We all have moved on, so stop it with the blame & open your eyes to the cause of all the games. For she will always continue & never let go, isnt it about time that you should know there are 2 sides to the story n one day you will see that the the ending is near for all of us to see ... |
9/26/2007 |
| sophie langsdal |
its wicked thats sounds the right poem 4 my step dad! |
5/23/2006 |
| heather |
yeah u tell him good poem girl. |
5/12/2006 |
| katie |
it's a ok way to go, there are alot worse ways to let it all out. i will look up more of your work. i think you are only angery too because you love your dad. but it is ok, u no. |
4/28/2006 |
| cathryne |
its okay, a little mediocre. keep working , ilike the ending sound like joel hlonouski |
4/20/2006 |
| break up kid |
what a really great poem it made me laugh, cry and angry all in one go. keep writing your words ring true for alot of us. thank you
r. |
4/10/2006 |
| family lost |
when children r caught in the cross fire of lies and affairs everyone involved gets hurt. hope u and yr family r brave enough 2 move on some of us r not. |
4/10/2006 |
| lost and |
u r a very very brave girl 4 putting yr feelings out there. hope u and yr family have the strength 2 carry on. |
4/10/2006 |
| jo |
ok- this probs aint wat u wana hear- bt my dad did that 2 me- and we didnt talk for 2yrs- and the first time afta thoes 2yrs was whan i was speeakin at his funeral
i know it will b hard- but you dsnt want the nxt time u 2 c ur dad he is dead- life is too short- it will b hard- i wish i had time to say "I FORGIVE YOU DAD" |
3/24/2006 |
| rd74 |
Thank you for capturing hidden human emotions that needs to beheard. Continue to write... |
3/12/2006 |
| Tally |
wow you must be really angry but i feel your pain, sort of.... |
3/8/2006 |
| karley |
I m not exactly sure what you might be going through but I do have problems with my dad too. Not that he's cheating but that he is not there at all |
3/6/2006 |
| Relative |
To Justin A Kautz, Excuse me but she didn't mess up herself - she was the one caught in the middle. Just because you're MESS UP in the HEAD and obviously can't get over it. WHO ARE YOU TO TALK !! Go get some help Mr Justin who takes it out on everyone else. |
3/5/2006 |
| Justin A Kautz |
damn ur messes up my mom left me get over it cry baby |
3/5/2006 |
| Sarah Rebecca |
Well done for being able to be brave enough to express your hurt and ignorance for your father in such a creative way, you could of gone about it badly by becoming an alcoholic or something but you didn't. You my love are brave. Good luck and best wishes in your life xox |
3/5/2006 |
| braveheart |
" what a poem @ what a way 2 let your dad know u r hurting. I think u r very brave
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3/4/2006 |
| Amanda F. |
i think its great. ive never met my dad but hes been trying to find us since he srtaightened out his life. my mom would go back to him but we cant find him. |
3/2/2006 |
| blacktown boys |
blacktown boys think yr poem rocks.
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3/1/2006 |
| blacktown girls |
your poem is great, please please write more. we love u |
2/27/2006 |
| 16 and really b |
i'm reading your poem and feeling your sorrow, i'm sorry for your pain, for the pain of your family. i guess it is not just my house it happens in other homes to. please write more it was wonderful and true, true for both me and u. thanks |
2/27/2006 |
| Relative |
Whanau in Blacktown. Who are you ??. |
2/27/2006 |
| xenna cooke |
hi darl i just wanna say that poem was really deepfull and he must of really hurt u all but i recon it wa sreally good. And im sorry to read that he would do something like that. c ya be strong |
2/23/2006 |
| blacktown |
dear airini, we no u r hurting, we wish u or yr mum would ring us or tell us where u r. we can't take away the pain u r all feeling, but we can be there. tell mum to ring, we miss u all so much. yr whanau in blacktown
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2/23/2006 |
| disfunstional |
our dad left us for a younger woman, he just comes when he wants to buys us everything then goes again. we never really talk @ he never comes to my things. my mum cries late at nite when she thinks we are asleep, i hate my dad, i hate him so much. your poem is the best it says all the things i wish i could say but cant. |
2/23/2006 |
| X |
Forgiveness is the healing of wounds caused by another. You choose to let go of a past wrong and no longer be hurt by it. Forgiveness is a strong move to make, like turning your shoulders sideways to walk quickly on a crowded sidewalk. It's your move.
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2/23/2006 |
| Amanda.J |
i can't lie my dad left me and my mom for a older woman and i hate him for it so you keep it up |
2/21/2006 |
| left behind |
it is so sad to be lied to @ hurt for my family broke up when our dad wanted to come home it was all just to late. i feel sorry for your pain. but be strong for the ones left behind.
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2/21/2006 |
| nz whanau |
i wanted 2 no wat whanau was talk bout. u go girl express yrself, no one thinks bout the tamariki. be strong arohanui. nz whanau |
2/21/2006 |
| Kayla |
hey airini, it's kayla! Awsome poem hunny i loved it and don't let him get you down he is a typicall male and he was in the wrong not you. love cake
Kayla |
2/21/2006 |
| Aunty Paulette |
Your poem is awesome. I'm so sorry you had to go through that. But you are so strong minded and I'm so proud of you. Just remember I am always here for you.......You have been so awesome I can't express how wonderful you are. Give my LOVE to MUM and Boomer. See at Easter Bubba. |
2/20/2006 |
| Lisa |
Well done buba unfortunately we all saw five years ago what your mar couldnt see. Nows your chance to be really happy be strong take care of your mum and booms and let those creative juices flow reguardless of fear of hurting someones feeling as you have feelings too that must be expressed in order to grow. luv ya. |
2/20/2006 |
| G |
dear airin's just read your poem i know your feeling down but trust me as time goes by u will feel better lots of love G |
2/20/2006 |
| jodie |
it's true, nobody thinks about how we feel when yr family falls apart. we have feelings too.... |
2/20/2006 |
| ... |
awsome poem |
2/19/2006 |
| rachel |
awsome, my dad left me for another women, i felt angry to and i felt the only way i could express myself was by writting poems, keep up the good work |
2/18/2006 |
