A Christmas Without You

I wrote this to describe how I felt when I got a locket my dad wanted me to have before he died. I found the locket under my Christmas tree my first Christmas without my dad.
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trish uk my gran died 5 years ago on the 29th december i was only 10 years old and she dies of a heart attack in front of me and in my big brothers arms, when he was 17 i knew her from the moment i were born to the minute she died and she was so important to me she lived with me all my life aswell so me and her were really close and i loved her soo much it is so painful to have to go through the death of the loved one but to see them go through that pain and die right in front of your eyes is so much more painful I had to have a few sessions of councilling so that i could geton with my GCSEs at school because i only want to do what my grandma would be proud of me for doing. which would to be a journalist or a writer or to achieve something she knows will make me happy i miss her loads and i would do anything in the world to get her back x 12/24/2008
fish You're such a strong person. Keep doing everything you can to make your dad proud. He obviously loves you. 2/23/2006
mrs. thomas i think it's a wonderful poem! it brought tears to my eyes it made me feel like it was me! keep writing! 2/13/2006
courtney i think it was a very good poem my mom died when i was 13 and ill be 16 in 2 weeks and i know how sad it is to have a christmas with out some one you love very much 1/10/2006
misty that reminds me of my past christmas my dad died on Semtember 27, 2005. i miss him so much and he left me the locket i had given him 5 years ago on father's day. 12/26/2005
Lauren gave me chills.. great poem 12/23/2005
sharnna man that was really touching my cusin died n he left me something 2 n yeh i got it last christmas 12/20/2005
????? that is a reli sweet poem my dad is not here wit me either so i no how u feel 12/19/2005
ashley and paig this is a cool poem 12/17/2005
kitty i am sory i cryed when i read it
12/17/2005
tricia i like that one i cryed when i read it 12/17/2005
Kisha dat sound o-k but whoever the girl is I'm sorry for what has happened I Hope you get better soon And Merry x-mas 12/16/2005
shawndella This is sad and sorry that happend I send my blessing
to you.
And have a Merry Chritmas and rember you'r dad will all way's be in you'r hurt.
He will all way's be in you'r hurt no matter what happends.And this is a realy sad but good poem keep it up.
Sometime I pitcer them thier and it all ways works out for me.
12/14/2005
jodie that great 12/12/2005
desi are you goning to right in more peoms 12/12/2005
desi loveit
12/12/2005
desi a good peom
12/12/2005
d3esyg so are you going to rigth some more peoms soon 12/12/2005
d3esyg a good peom
12/12/2005
d3esyg loveit
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d3esyg love it

12/12/2005
elmo This is a really sad poem and it makes me think alot about what it might be like without a dad 12/9/2005
M.J I think this is a great poem, I know how you feel, i lost my dad too, 2 years ago. but this poem makes me feel better. 12/9/2005
sam this is sad because it has ahppened to so many people around the world. maybe one day things wont be so bad. till then, all we can do is try to be happy and live our lives.... 12/8/2005
Erica Oh my god! This is one of the best poems I ever read and I really want to tell the person who wrote this, Taylor Rugg (my cousin) that she writes wonderful and even very sad poems. Its going to be okay Tay =(. Well I love her and she rocks! Love you Taylor! Love, cousin Erica (RICCAAA lol) 12/7/2005
audrey omg i feel the same way cause i lost my grandpa and this will be the first christmas without him 12/7/2005
chaz wow i dont no wot the hell u have gone tho but heak i feel for u just like me i have lost my dad 12/6/2005
Lacey awwww, im sorry that was such a good poem a bit emotional but it was really good, 12/5/2005
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