Deadly Secret

Horror: Some secrets are best kept...forever.
Comments on article "Deadly Secret"
Name Views and CommentsDate
Angel Oh my i love the mystery and the story its amazing 5/21/2009
Brenda How on earth do you leave a person hanging like that. Is there a part 2 I hope so. I'll look for it if there is. See ya 7/23/2008
Rere I thought the lady was too mean and the story was boring 2/28/2008
zhane landeau wat happens last? 2/22/2008
frank Hey wait up everyone who's read this. He's done this mistake on purpose.I've seen the author's first draft of this story. The girl's name is Tina though she lies to the woman by telling her that her name is Angela. 12/9/2006
nuthin gr8 not bad 12/4/2006
batmana I think it's a pretty crappy story. The author is obviously an amateur - and not only because of the change of the main character's name. He could have made a great story with that idea but completely ruined it with his poor writing. 11/9/2006
baya i enjoyed this story a lot too.. 10/28/2006
she should of ran girl 8/4/2006
JayC What do you mean nobody cares if you change the main characters name?Of course it matters.I admit its a good story but you cant just transform characters throughout the story without a plausible explanation.That just simply cancels out the quality.Its like writing a draft of some random story at home in a notebook and then plastering it to an internet site for all to see. 7/25/2006
ffn no lie 5/29/2006
Liz Who cares if you switched names? It's the story that counts and it's one of the best I've read in a long time. 5/8/2006
JMoon I enjoyed this story a lot. 3/9/2006
Angetina Did she do that by depol or was it a mistake? 2/19/2006
Jon/Jane Keep out of my draws y'hear! 2/19/2006
afrienddxb nice...can make a good time pass horror movie 1/4/2006
melinda omg that was a very interesting story and it leaves off at the very good part i like that about stories cuz it leaves u cerious but dag i wanna know what happen!! it was very clever was the best one i read so far it was so detailed and everything bravo very good , and yes like olivia said u did switch the main character's name from tina to angela 1/1/2006
Olivia You switched the name of the main character from "Tina" to "Angela". 12/14/2005
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