I'm So Hungry
The Journal of Mark Tetrafin. He is a child that goes through a rough period and discovers a new thirst.
| Comments on article "I'm So Hungry" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| da author |
i have more to this story but, i don't like the comments from people on here so yeah i am going to leave it sitting there. i have waaaayyy more to this story than just the two parts i wrote on here. |
8/21/2007 |
| sinead |
makes me wanna read more |
6/15/2007 |
| shody |
wats up u can write some stoies |
5/3/2007 |
| keke |
wat u doin |
5/3/2007 |
| hungry |
im so hungry |
4/19/2007 |
| wow |
no |
1/12/2007 |
| bethany |
Bad, its not about Hunger or anything! |
10/6/2006 |
| katie |
I liked the way you wrote it! |
8/8/2006 |
| Tia |
That is even to short for a short story! It was boring and there was NO point. Just my opinion at least you tried. |
7/21/2006 |
| Tia |
To short and boring. |
7/21/2006 |
| ****** |
Heh!? |
7/17/2006 |
| da author |
and who the hell is adrian mole? |
7/5/2006 |
| Bubble_pop |
I think it was different and funny. |
7/5/2006 |
| sam |
sorry dont reali like it boring |
7/5/2006 |
| Mila |
Not Adrian Mole, if that's what you're trying to be. Too short, too plain, too boring. I'm hoping there's more to this and you dont leave it there. |
5/17/2006 |
| Kris |
Very powerful, excellent. Loved it, well done. |
5/17/2006 |
| sschaos |
what was the point of this?
barely any emotion
too short to be a story
booooring |
5/16/2006 |
| River |
You're so hungry I saw you at the junk yard yesterday |
4/16/2006 |
| jackie |
good job |
4/16/2006 |
| elle jay |
not very interesting needs to flow.besides that it was a good opening |
3/26/2006 |
| Jenny |
I think it's good but it needs more actio towards it!!!!
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2/18/2006 |
| ?? |
Uhhmm, a little wierd.. the headline and the story are totally different from each other, and by the way, what a wierdo to write down what he's going every single day, i know it's a story but just my opinion, i don't like it |
12/22/2005 |
| MR.x |
you are a loser |
9/30/2005 |
| gabby |
i like your storie alot
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9/9/2005 |
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