| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| BiBBy At Tc |
wow..it must be hard ..i've grown up without a dad and i know how does it feel ! but it doesnt bother me anymore as u said..my love and respect ..gone when he left ;) it's just great..that u learnt to stand up all alone and show that ur strong to this life ! |
2/9/2009 |
| kat |
i was about to cry when i read this! |
11/8/2007 |
| [x]Suzenne[x] |
I hope you liked my poem |
10/10/2007 |
| [x]Suzenne[x] |
andgirlbelieve me maybe my dad wasn't in prisonbut I konw what you feel cause you could say I never had one cause he wasn't here ....and I'm also 14 years old I write poems about him how I feelmost of my poems are about him ..... like this one
I could see my life flash in front of my eyes, another part of me dies.
No good times to remember never could have spent time together.
You can’t see me you’re showing it clearly.
The truth is you left me here behind but you can’t see that cause you’re to blind.
There’re some truth I can’t reveal cause you won’t take it for real
I want your love and not your time have I just wanted things to be fine
It was painful seeing you walk out that door and knowing you won’t come back anymore
Days pass me bye and I’m still wondering …damn why
These wounds they don’t seem to heal only one person takes me for real
Life is like a prison you can’t go anywhere when the pain is still there
I have to move on without you cause I can’t handle what you’re making me go trough
I wish you where here instead of there.
I wish I knew where you are, are you near or are far?
Just pick up the phone and tell me you’ll come back home.
You’re hurting me can’t you see?
But I guess you don’t want to be here together, so coming here is never.
I wish I knew more of you, is this what you wanted to do, I know deep down inside you’re hurt to.
Sometimes I try not to cry, I can’t stop this it’s you that I miss.
I wish you could be by my side day and night and when I’m sad you will hold me tight and make me glad.
Dad where’d you go I miss you so!
I will never forget you dad.
I wish I could have the dad I never had, the one that wasn’t by my side when I needed him the most…………….
I hope you like my poem I hope you will get well....Take Care |
10/9/2007 |
| [x]Suzenne[x] |
welyou konw this poems broth tears to my eyes really cause my dad was never here for me he never told me goodnight nevver sayed goodmornign was always busy or away and no he's gone caus ehe diforced my mom he doesn't love me he doesn't care he's never been here NEVER It hurts so much when you don't really know you're dad and that he doesn't even try to see his own daughter it really hurts ..... :'( But I can't keep on crying for him I can't force him to love me I can't force him to see me I can't force him to call me and say everythings ok I don't know where he is now I don't even konw if he's alive cause I don't hear anything from him ..... IT hurts.... |
10/9/2007 |
| Sherri |
This is an awesome poem and reminds me of what my children are going through with their father, my oldest is 4 and realized a little of whats goin on, but still kinda confused..and my daughter is 20months and doesnt even have a clue who this man is, whos name is daddy... |
5/28/2007 |
| unknown |
i really like that peom my dad left when i was very young he went to jail when i was 6 years old
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8/15/2006 |
| christina |
i think that that is the best poem i have ever heard that is exactly how i feel |
6/6/2006 |
| f off |
it was harsh full ur dad probley didnt mean to stay away ur ignorint |
5/29/2006 |
| Ayla |
god this is so sad, it's moving and amazing and sad. i really feel for you. |
5/17/2006 |
| Elaine |
My dad is not here either he lives in another town but i live with my stepmom and i see him every weekend but i do hope u keep writing u r really good |
5/10/2006 |
| elmo |
i really really loved that one |
4/7/2006 |
| beemerbrit |
that is me!! |
2/24/2006 |
| Shawndella |
This is a sad poem that's all most what happend to me exsaped i'm not going to see mine because he was not a good dad and he hurt me and my mom.
And i never wonte to see him.
And that's why i'm not going to see my real dad and they put him in jail wen i was unger too.
i havent seen him sence i was 1 years old.
so i now how you feel. |
11/22/2005 |
| ASHLEY |
I LIKE DAT POEM B CUZ MY DAD WAS LOCKED UP 4 9 YEARS AND HE JUS CAME OUT 5 YEARS AGO AND UNTILL DIS DAY I SILL FEEL AS IS HE IS NOT MA DAD |
8/30/2005 |
| unknowen?? |
wow im crying while im writting this i think it is so sad and you are a gr8 writter |
8/5/2005 |
| unknown |
awww this poem is sooo touching and i ve felt like that!!!!!! |
8/3/2005 |
| Kayla |
WOW!
I actually started to cry...
that is such a good poem
keep writing |
7/26/2005 |
| Scarelt |
I know what its like not to have a dad , he left when i was 7 i watched him walk out on me and my sister , my mom was never around much either but if my dad came back .... i want to see him just to ask him why... i get along fine with out him so does my sister but i still have that one question eating away at me i always wonder why .... this poem was awesome .. now i dont know the whole story with your dad and why he went to jail but just think about it and take the chance this might be they only one you have to ask him why he made the mistakes he made ...... just think about it ...once again i loved your poem |
7/24/2005 |
| nats |
im sorry that really hurt me i agure with my dad sometimes and hes been there and i just relised im lucky to have a dad |
7/22/2005 |
| katie |
this reminds me of the fag they call my dad |
7/21/2005 |
| Regina Barajas |
hey this poem touched me.this has really happened to me,the only difference is that my dad isn't in jail.he just walked out.and i learned to live with out.he showed me nothing.and iam growing up good. |
7/16/2005 |
| tonisha |
dear tayya,i know how you feel my daddy tried to kill my mom i stepped in and he thew me into a door,
it is hard ,i never had my dad either, your have a real talent to bad your dad is missing it. |
7/14/2005 |
| kennashea |
i dont know if this is based on a true story or not but this really touched me because my dad hasnt been in my life and i would do any thing 4 my dad 2 wright me a note and want to be in my life even though it hurt when he wasnt and i begain to hate him but i know 4 a fact that i would do almost any thing 4 my dad 2 want to be in my life thanx |
7/8/2005 |
| gemma wearmouth |
i think this poem is realy upsetting |
7/5/2005 |
