| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| sweety |
Indeed ! Everything that seems rosy isnt actually rosy in real..
Its in our bad times that we get to kno the true essence of life...
Also, only the person who loves you coz of the beauty of ur soul is ur true lover ! Gud story Oliver ! |
7/16/2009 |
| julyjens |
short & sweet.
it's an must read !
job well done ! |
10/29/2008 |
| june straw |
if i was like the ugly duckling i would not no what to say everything is so difrent to him like everyone use to say he is ugly and everyone use to fite but it dosn't matter what you look like and what you sound like because you are all the same but dirrent things we do so dont be mean are farce |
1/2/2008 |
| beth thompson |
everyone has to be fair dot all ways be stuck up |
10/8/2007 |
| bethxx |
your things or good and bad but there is only one whay live |
9/19/2007 |
| beth |
evey little bit is like a person who has no mening to them but to other people.Like if people be nice then be NASTE to them but if you like them one minte u do all the time kep this letter in the mind all the time. |
6/25/2007 |
| beth |
evey one thinks thay are good but evey one is in the is good |
3/30/2007 |
| beth |
evey one get's a chance so give it to them |
3/10/2007 |
| compter mad |
Evey one look's down on you because you are yuneing but set an example in the blrese in spiche that peses was fround in the bible it is saying you sitle have to look have to luck up |
2/25/2007 |
| Beth |
the heart in you may be good or bad but how ever it is send a message to you and tell people you are not a wimp and shoue wont you rilly are if you are a women tell poeple that men can't do all the good gobes and all the men have got to help people will all the chindren get out mare. |
2/24/2007 |
| n.g.b.e.t.h |
Eveyone likes a chance but make a fare one and make a good one .And if you make a promise the rule is do not brake it. |
2/24/2007 |
| beth. t |
a preset is like love and kidness but paople don't think about love or kidness they think about looks and shopping but they never thank god won't you have got some people don't have so think of the ugly duck and wen he had dothing eveyone just laugh at it so think. |
2/24/2007 |
| june |
you shound't judge peple about the lucks you shoud judge people about the kidness and giving to athers bye bye. |
2/24/2007 |
| N.A.P. |
lovely is the word that comes to mind |
9/24/2006 |
| meo_kelly |
beauty? not important but important! beauty in soul is allways the best! |
9/13/2006 |
| kevin |
i think it could be made into a very good movie...... |
5/29/2006 |
| Edith Bartel |
Loved your short story, it is so true to real life. |
5/13/2006 |
| laildel_018 |
you can notice easily the flow of the story when you read the title but i think there's something behide the story that you can notice after analyzing it |
10/7/2005 |
| Ruel |
uhm...nice read. |
8/13/2005 |
| Josie |
It was an alright story, the storyline was good but the writing was kinda mushy and not very concise |
8/6/2005 |
| vosh88 |
an Excellent little moraluty tale and very well done
I hope to read more of your works
keep at it with all your heart... |
7/28/2005 |
| Someone |
this story shows so much about how life can change and how your hopes can be realized this is a wonderful story! |
7/18/2005 |
| Taranee |
i hope you still have some other short stories that focuses on the entire teenage life..But the story is amazing though I've read some of this kind of stories before. |
7/3/2005 |
| Rick |
Very nice one |
6/11/2005 |
