The Vampire's Love - Chapter 4
It had been over two months since we saw Dahmer and his followers, and by now we were sure they were dead. One day though we heard a noise coming from the entrance to our lair.
| Comments on article "The Vampire's Love - Chapter 4" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| dave |
Your chapters are a little short but other than thatits a good story. |
2/8/2008 |
| Boredperson=( |
P.S. i also agree with K-Kay and ClimClop srry. T_T |
7/4/2007 |
| Boredperson=( |
Dang what the hell did Dahmer do? wtf? and Damien cried? HE CRIED?!? this is a true cliff hanger. |
7/4/2007 |
| Climclop |
I agree with K-Kay...it's a good story but this particular chapter had me a bit disappointed. Would have been much better if there were more in depth detail, and I didn't like the part where Damien is crying, didn't seem much in character. |
4/20/2007 |
| olivia |
i love it and its sad 2 |
3/18/2007 |
| K-Kay |
i think this part of the story is really good but needs to a bit more informative about what he did like if she really is serving beside him as his queen she schould be able to help not just send them all to her husband...maybe you schould put something in about the girl he got pregnent becasue you put her in but then she is dropped..if you were not going to talk about her she should not have been put but there is a lot of potenatal in just that little detail..like you could have a convo with her and talk about maybe how the war started and get a womens perspective so she can talk to her husband and know what he will say.....i really love the story it has great potental |
1/26/2007 |
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