| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Phoenix |
I love this story! |
11/11/2009 |
| Travis Miles |
This seems like you could write a very good book and get money for it. your story is good and deals with vampires which are totally in right now. I would buy a book if you made one.
You have a feel for the art in writing and I am writing a book having to do with sci fi not published yet but hopefully it will be some time in the future keep up the good work.
Travis MIles
The Hopeless Romantic |
10/1/2009 |
| redd |
i didnt even read the whole story due to i got very sick w/ ... |
6/9/2009 |
| redd |
ya your so in love well it must be nice |
6/9/2009 |
| VampireGal94 |
This story is AWSOME! |
6/2/2009 |
| Dystanie Haney |
i love these stories about the mortals becoming turned into immortal vampires or other creatures to live eternity with their loving partners, these stories are filled with so much love that i wish i was in them! |
5/29/2009 |
| emily |
=[ I wish I had a vampire boyfriend |
4/24/2009 |
| abe |
it was grate the beast iv read lots of detail and pachen in it... but i rilly think this would make a good book for the wourld to read there are a lot of people out there who would read this stufe. |
4/4/2009 |
| vevo |
what is up with this story we need more romance! |
3/17/2009 |
| ladeana |
l think that l very much like your story if they were for sale l would bye them.That is the best story l`ve read yet. |
2/20/2009 |
| jellibelli |
I think it could use a little more detail. Its an excellant story line and you obviously love to write about it so put some more passion in it. Plus that will make it longer : ) |
1/3/2009 |
| Vampgrly4535 |
why coffins? Its so old schoolish...How bout they live more modern...you know? It just makes it sound like something out of the 1300's...lol...good story though:) |
12/2/2008 |
| x |
the time of Vald the Impaler, or Vald Dracula, as he was also known as.
is Vlad Dracula no Vald
he lived in Sighisoara,Romania and he is the father of Vlad Tepes from who started the stories with vampires
i don't speak verry well english so sorry for my mistakes of writing |
11/22/2008 |
| rochelle |
love it so romantic |
1/1/2008 |
| Boredperson=( |
The supence is killing me this is a very good chapter i cant wait to read the others |
7/4/2007 |
| Climclop |
This is a very good chapter, I enjoyed it more than the last, though it still seems to be missing something. Sorry about the pessimism. |
4/20/2007 |
| Hannah |
Still, I cannot seem to love this article as others do. But like the others, I myself love vampires, I have read tons of vampire novels, I have confessed to others what I think about them, and have been laughed at because of it. This article, however perfect we may think it, has flaws that none of us can yet justify. |
12/21/2006 |
| Maharani |
Getting interesting isn't it? |
10/2/2006 |
| Wilfredo |
I want to know more, that short passage was very interesting, what happens next?, the extreme empuzzlement I will now bw in. |
3/1/2006 |
