Pain of a child
I wrote this poem after I saw a little girl on my bus who was being pimped out by her mom.
| Comments on article "Pain of a child" |
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Views and Comments | Date |
| c.hailey |
Wow, it's you, again, dear Aaron! Like the Aaron of the Bible, you have a call on your life. You will be a voice for those who cannot help themselves. You will help many in the future. Your life's purpose is contained in this poem. Set your focus and go for it. |
9/10/2006 |
| iunisi |
great stuff |
8/25/2006 |
| ranen |
some lines a bit long, trie and break them up a bit |
2/12/2006 |
| Lindsey Watkins |
This poem was great! Its the truth, why not help other children while they need u? I can relate to that sometimes i would like to help but right now im just a child myself i cant give them much. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! KEEP WRITTING POEMS!!!!!! |
1/25/2006 |
| grace |
hello, when i was a child, i was always depressed. I had no one to turn to when im sad, especially when im suffering. there are times i feel like i want to end my life, because soo many things people expect me to do, and i always fail, because i can't deliver it. but most of all i always feel like i didn't belong.
but all i can say is that, when you see someone crying, please don't let it pass you by, don't go or move on, go to that person and comfort them and listen to them, you don't need to advice them or solve their problem. Most of them just want someone to actually listen to their sorrow and comport them. You'll never know, you might just change their life, and made a difference
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4/22/2005 |
| chivonne |
your poem is so true!! i agree with you... i feel this every day...i also fear thi every day also...
chivonne 14 melb croydon XX |
3/8/2005 |
| GeriAnn |
it's a good poem, it really shows your feelings and emotions. but you can help if you see that, even just by complementing the child on their beautiful eyes or mention that tommrow is another day. or even how things can only get better.....or even as simple as a smile. remember....the littlest things can do the most. |
2/3/2005 |
| mimi |
it's okay just help a child. |
1/16/2005 |
| mariah parham |
yeah i feel that way some time around homeless people so hey if i had 2 rate your poem i would rate it a 10 on a scale of 1 to 10 |
11/27/2004 |
| Dana |
I felt the deep inner pain that was inside of you and i felt for the child as well and I wanted to say that you did a very good job .
I was a child growing up in the world with a mother that was a madom |
11/2/2004 |
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