| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| ur momma |
stormy rainy nights are awesome cool but you need is a weird fat donkey in it buddy |
11/14/2008 |
| Swarup |
Hey its not scary its funny indeed... |
5/27/2008 |
| hinata |
ok that dude gets scared way too easily. why didn't remember he had a cat? because he is foergetful! it was a good story and i got a kick out of it. |
5/23/2008 |
| Aaron |
Well, you could have built up the suspence a little more, and you should have mentioned the cat earlier in the story. |
3/27/2008 |
| kaths145 |
nice story |
2/7/2008 |
| unknown hehe |
sikk story i used bits for me skool work thankz
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12/6/2007 |
| Bossy Chic#1 |
ITS AMAZING HOW YOUR MIND CAN PLAY TRICKS ON YOU .DID HE FORGET THAT HE HAD A CAT? |
11/26/2007 |
| deli |
my heartbeat increased and at last decreased!
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10/26/2007 |
| awryt d lawd |
luvs it! |
10/1/2007 |
| Lenny |
lol....funny ending...not much of a horror story though |
8/15/2007 |
| BRENDA SIGLER |
kind of cute and sweet ,but needs more depth |
6/27/2007 |
| Holly |
Badly written, but a good story with a interesting ending |
5/14/2007 |
| big bernie |
im in love.i cant stop thinkin about u.john u r da 1 4 me.i fantase bot u .gt mre pics of u up. |
5/2/2007 |
| i love bernie! |
bernie i agree with u one hundred percent!! u have an eye for great stories! i love u!! |
5/2/2007 |
| love = bernie |
i luv u jon |
5/2/2007 |
| TIERNEE A. |
IT WAS SCARY AT FIRST AND THEN HE DIED AT THE END BY SURPRISE |
4/13/2007 |
| Nina |
This was a good story with an unexpected ending... Keep going.... This is nice ... Cheers !!! |
4/6/2007 |
| Freak |
Nice story |
3/17/2007 |
| dominique |
You are a genious. Love this. Awsome storie. |
3/12/2007 |
| LLover |
hahah Lol he stupid but funny! |
2/6/2007 |
| up ireland |
deadly |
1/30/2007 |
| bernie |
im soo scared i luv u 4 ritn dat book |
1/19/2007 |
| bernie |
thank u still |
11/29/2006 |
| Bernie |
I have just read the day that was meant to go wrong urs wuz more scary! implausable jon |
11/29/2006 |
| scared=bernie |
Flames to dust lovers to 4nds t do all good things cum2 n end ( like ur book!!) |
11/29/2006 |
| Bernie |
Im shakin in my boots dat wuz scary ps thanks |
11/29/2006 |
| Bernie |
serously dat wuz scary |
11/29/2006 |
| Bernie |
Im shaking at my computer thanks alot |
11/29/2006 |
| neil |
excellent twist
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11/20/2006 |
| Holli |
Gud story but the sentences wernt very well thought out and seemed strained and not flowing..trying to hrad to make things descriptive ..but great story line |
11/20/2006 |
| gail |
i thought that was great story.... i really enjoyed that... |
11/16/2006 |
| nivi |
this is freakin awesome gurl..keep ritin |
10/6/2006 |
| chelsea |
When i started reading this i thouht it would be a normal horror story but when i fgot about to the 2nd paragraph i was getting tense and nervous and when it wads near the end i was spooked out ( it doesnt help when im sat near a kitchen). This is a great horror story with a great ending!!!!! |
9/11/2006 |
| lizzie rose 15 |
that was a cool story |
7/13/2006 |
| kat |
well gud buk |
5/18/2006 |
| Kris |
Very good, good twist at the end. Not predictable! |
5/17/2006 |
| Melissa |
too predictable, sentences to awkward...meh |
5/3/2006 |
| LAURA |
awsome story. |
10/29/2005 |
| eduardo |
well....... gues its alright alitle long thogh, makes people get lazy.... but its ok |
10/26/2005 |
| whoa |
it is such a wonderful story, whoever wrote this can make such comedy and suspense
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8/27/2005 |
| soumya |
very good story |
4/23/2005 |
