His Destiny

A lonely teacher confronts his demons. Reluctant, short of breath, he opened the trunk, slowly, and shined the flashlight inside. The dark-haired woman's crumpled body was there amid broken glass, as he'd feared.
Comments on article "His Destiny"
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passer-by 9 nice story 2/28/2008
Sebastian Wonderfully written!! One of the most enthralling short stories I've ever read. The twist at the end left my mouth agape! 10/23/2007
Natasha This story has a terrific ending and a certainly surprising one at that. 5/16/2007
Birdine Remaley Truly a great read. I enjoyed how you turned the story around to where the main character's worse dreams became a reality. Very well written. I, too, have written mystery & suspense stories for Buzzle, but I am only a novice compared to your skills. I was wondering if you could read mine and provide me with some feedback, good or bad. I consider this a learning experience. My stories are the "Noah Dowelsby" stories and "Terror in Small Town Pennsylvania". 4/21/2007
amber i like it alot it inspired me to write a similar storie, with a teenage girl, and a troubled past 3/30/2005
Chris it was very good story. I like the suspense. The whole car thing was cool. 11/4/2004
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