His Destiny
Comments on article "His Destiny"| Name | Views and Comments | Date |
| ngw.megha | hiiiiiiiii its a gr8 astory luved it | 11/1/2011 |
| Ann Marie | bored at work that really helped the time go buy really good story keep writting you have a gift . embrace it | 9/6/2010 |
| The Librarian | Great idea. Messes with your head. | 8/5/2010 |
| meow13 | wow, it was gr8. srsly. i loved the ending. | 3/25/2010 |
| yellowpaper3 | hahaHAhaha. You gave it away when you talked about his appearance BUT you were a professional writer. You must have written a lot before this. Most of the 'stories' I read now on this site are crumpled, badly thought out, and rife with typos...I'm so glad you wrote this first. | 12/23/2009 |
| LexD | awesome | 11/27/2009 |
| ckat1 | Very good. I love the ending. | 9/7/2009 |
| sam | love love love | 9/4/2009 |
| thisgirl | wow.. its awesome! i love it.. very well written and a really cool story line too | 6/22/2009 |
| Mrs.Ezell | This was great! | 12/19/2008 |
| passer-by 9 | nice story | 2/28/2008 |
| Sebastian | Wonderfully written!! One of the most enthralling short stories I've ever read. The twist at the end left my mouth agape! | 10/23/2007 |
| Natasha | This story has a terrific ending and a certainly surprising one at that. | 5/16/2007 |
| Birdine Remaley | Truly a great read. I enjoyed how you turned the story around to where the main character's worse dreams became a reality. Very well written. I, too, have written mystery & suspense stories for Buzzle, but I am only a novice compared to your skills. I was wondering if you could read mine and provide me with some feedback, good or bad. I consider this a learning experience. My stories are the "Noah Dowelsby" stories and "Terror in Small Town Pennsylvania". | 4/21/2007 |
| amber | i like it alot it inspired me to write a similar storie, with a teenage girl, and a troubled past | 3/30/2005 |
| Chris | it was very good story. I like the suspense. The whole car thing was cool. | 11/4/2004 |

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