His Destiny
A lonely teacher confronts his demons. Reluctant, short of breath, he opened the trunk, slowly, and shined the flashlight inside. The dark-haired woman's crumpled body was there amid broken glass, as he'd feared.
| Comments on article "His Destiny" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| passer-by 9 |
nice story |
2/28/2008 |
| Sebastian |
Wonderfully written!! One of the most enthralling short stories I've ever read. The twist at the end left my mouth agape! |
10/23/2007 |
| Natasha |
This story has a terrific ending and a certainly surprising one at that. |
5/16/2007 |
| Birdine Remaley |
Truly a great read. I enjoyed how you turned the story around to where the main character's worse dreams became a reality. Very well written. I, too, have written mystery & suspense stories for Buzzle, but I am only a novice compared to your skills. I was wondering if you could read mine and provide me with some feedback, good or bad. I consider this a learning experience. My stories are the "Noah Dowelsby" stories and "Terror in Small Town Pennsylvania". |
4/21/2007 |
| amber |
i like it alot it inspired me to write a similar storie, with a teenage girl, and a troubled past |
3/30/2005 |
| Chris |
it was very good story. I like the suspense. The whole car thing was cool. |
11/4/2004 |
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