His Destiny

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ngw.megha hiiiiiiiii its a gr8 astory luved it 11/1/2011
Ann Marie bored at work that really helped the time go buy really good story keep writting you have a gift . embrace it 9/6/2010
The Librarian Great idea. Messes with your head. 8/5/2010
meow13 wow, it was gr8. srsly. i loved the ending. 3/25/2010
yellowpaper3 hahaHAhaha. You gave it away when you talked about his appearance BUT you were a professional writer. You must have written a lot before this. Most of the 'stories' I read now on this site are crumpled, badly thought out, and rife with typos...I'm so glad you wrote this first. 12/23/2009
LexD awesome 11/27/2009
ckat1 Very good. I love the ending. 9/7/2009
sam love love love 9/4/2009
thisgirl wow.. its awesome! i love it.. very well written and a really cool story line too 6/22/2009
Mrs.Ezell This was great! 12/19/2008
passer-by 9 nice story 2/28/2008
Sebastian Wonderfully written!! One of the most enthralling short stories I've ever read. The twist at the end left my mouth agape! 10/23/2007
Natasha This story has a terrific ending and a certainly surprising one at that. 5/16/2007
Birdine Remaley Truly a great read. I enjoyed how you turned the story around to where the main character's worse dreams became a reality. Very well written. I, too, have written mystery & suspense stories for Buzzle, but I am only a novice compared to your skills. I was wondering if you could read mine and provide me with some feedback, good or bad. I consider this a learning experience. My stories are the "Noah Dowelsby" stories and "Terror in Small Town Pennsylvania". 4/21/2007
amber i like it alot it inspired me to write a similar storie, with a teenage girl, and a troubled past 3/30/2005
Chris it was very good story. I like the suspense. The whole car thing was cool. 11/4/2004
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