Invisible Tears
Comments on article "Invisible Tears"| Name | Views and Comments | Date |
| James | I can relate. | 9/24/2011 |
| jakyia | same way i find | 4/14/2011 |
| sarat | nice! dont stop writing i want to hear maore of your poems! | 10/16/2010 |
| Bianca | I cn relate 2 dis p0ems! | 9/24/2010 |
| C | really good totally relatable \:D | 6/15/2010 |
| Maahi Kapur | nice one.. | 6/6/2010 |
| will w | a dark piece, but even nature has darkness in it. feels like you spoke from experince and heart. | 5/17/2010 |
| bethany church | i love this poem it fits me perfectly | 4/28/2010 |
| Kylie H. | Don't focus on the negative. If you appear happy.. BE happy. mind over matter! :) | 4/26/2010 |
| gagandeep | this is a great poem | 4/19/2010 |
| stuffedjoy | wow! | 4/19/2010 |
| j2 | a great poem to remind us (those who work with children) that there are hidden depths, joys and hurts to each one. very moving | 4/19/2010 |
| ale | that's really good. i liked how people can relate to ur poem and how u got across how the person feels:] | 4/7/2010 |
| cruzz | um i think it is out there. i guess it could be who you are but i would say you are calling for attention. | 3/27/2010 |
| reg | how can we see the true face ,if the mask is never allowed to slip, how can we be your saving grace , if you wont release your grip. | 3/5/2010 |
| the dominator | you spelt invisible wrong | 3/4/2010 |
| Kimberly | This is beatiful , i feel u i reALLY do, everyone is like that | 3/4/2010 |
| Alexa A. | thats auctually really beautiful | 2/26/2010 |
| No Name | This is great! So beautiful. Hopfully you don't really feel like this. | 2/19/2010 |
| Jenelle | wow...=( thats just like me... just pretending to be happy and forcing smiles so that my friends wont worry but really...im hurting in the inside...holding it all in...suffering great pain... | 2/3/2010 |
| Karen Peralta | it really relates to what i feel with everybody around me...they all think im soo happy all the time...it's never like that and this poem just is what i relate too. | 1/20/2010 |
| Anonymous | I really like it but i think the ending should be a tiny bit stronger than what you have. Overall your poem is a little awkward because your telling us what's happening not showing, almost all good poems involve showing what you mean instead of telling. other than that nice context and awesome poem | 1/19/2010 |
| Gokan | It has a soft deep rhytm. Good work. I love it. | 1/19/2010 |
| Youdontknowme | That was beautiful! | 1/10/2010 |
| Bridget | I feel like that sometimes. It was beautifully expressed. | 1/7/2010 |
| Joan W | Hello Shannon, If on the inside you are dying, dont make things worse by writing junk like this. Get your mind to focus on some positive things, maybe nature. Forget the invisible tears, they are a waste of time and this poem is a waste of thoughts and a waste of space. I am sick sore and tired of depressing poems. There are far far far too many | 1/2/2010 |
| you | you spelled invisible wrong | 12/4/2009 |
| h | invisible is misspelled you idiot | 11/30/2009 |
| jejz | What makes you sad? Where are the pains coming from? Why don't you share what you feel to somebody? Just be open and everybody will appreciate you what really are you. Pretending one's identity can't help you at all... | 11/25/2009 |
| Sad :( | I can relate... | 11/16/2009 |
| Kayla | I dont get this. | 11/13/2009 |
| GHISLAIN T | VERY, VERY SAD. | 11/9/2009 |
| rosie | job well done on the poem. I feel your pain and know exactly how you feel, that is the same way my everyday schedule goes. I hope to see more poetry by you, good luck(: |
11/4/2009 |
| chini bob | i feel that and I am sure so many of us go through it everyday. I am one of the most positive individual you may come across... from the outside, from the inside . . . its all gray and dull. but alas . .. life goes on. |
10/31/2009 |
| beau | :( i can relate to this | 10/29/2009 |
| wanna-can be | This is a good poem b/c it is also feelings that others share. | 10/27/2009 |
| Faith | I like it. | 10/27/2009 |
| merriel cajuela | nice poem | 10/21/2009 |
| angela | thats really sad but a great poem i feal ur pain | 10/20/2009 |
| Silent I. Nacht | This is a very pretty poem, and easy for those who are in pain to relate to. The structure seems fine, and the way your wrote it, it sounds to me like a stray thought in the back of my head. It's wonderful. However, the only thing I want to point out... Contractions should always have apostrophes (‘ ’). Otherwise, brilliant. |
10/19/2009 |
| McKenzie Noel | Wow... I never thought anyone could hit home so easily how I feel sometimes. You are like me; we both need to write. Do your poems reflect opposite, too? Mine do. | 10/16/2009 |
| Thabiso machate | I love this poem and I enjoy it I feel the deep part of it this poem is really great .a smile can hide all of your fears,worrie's,painful memories | 10/15/2009 |
| apoorva | it's like oh hummmmmmmmmmmm! | 10/15/2009 |
| vanessa | its quite good! but im just a lil bit confuse... dats ol!..godbless |
10/7/2009 |
| pkn | wow, you seem to be really depressed is this poem from your imagination? |
10/6/2009 |
| Tyra | I love this poem im 12 years old and i only enjoy some poems i have a web-site i fill whithm y favrite poems this is going to be one of them ! | 9/28/2009 |
| fox | omg, thts so deep, i lurve it! | 9/22/2009 |
| no name | THIS POEM IS GREAT I CANT BELIEVE U COULD WRITE THAT ITS AWESOME | 9/21/2009 |
| rovil | it is a good poem | 9/16/2009 |
| Nikole P | I love it and that is so like me. | 9/13/2009 |
| shannon | nope u did srry hun. | 9/11/2009 |
| notnice | you spelled invisble wrong | 9/11/2009 |
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