| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| ChaiTea |
I have to say I can't wait for this ending but Im also sad it will be over. Its going so good, keep it up ^.^ |
8/25/2009 |
| Ruth |
gorgeous |
8/24/2009 |
| Regina |
I will be REALLY sad when this story is over...
It's beautifully written.. it has all the major points that make a good story. Jealousy, Romance, One-sided love (supposedly), and so much more! Keep going, eh?: |
8/19/2009 |
| emma |
please!write please! |
8/19/2009 |
| shyamu |
hey i love ur story man |
8/19/2009 |
| jenny |
Damien better find Emily asap and confess his love for her blah blah blah. Emily tells him she loves him back ect. UPDATE PLEASE! |
8/17/2009 |
| sarah- |
write please! we are all waiting... please! |
8/14/2009 |
| Kaci |
Joanna H's idea is awesome! As the author you can make the story up however you want but I think that Joanna has thought of a great way to end this Aries. I found out about this series today and I've read all the chapters. You've done a great job with this series and are a really good writer! Congats on being proposed to! Can't wait ot read the next chapter! |
8/13/2009 |
| kari |
please write! |
8/10/2009 |
| E.S |
damien comes after her, duh. |
8/9/2009 |
| Brilla M. |
Do not worry! u will get it right! |
8/8/2009 |
| Amrit |
WOAH! Sorry its just me again... i was reading the other comments and read one by Joanna H. and oh my goss did she make the story interesting. PLEASE read her comment, i luv the clare issue though, never in a million years would i have thought she would be who she is! :) |
8/8/2009 |
| Amrit |
OMFG! I luv the story, i'm so addicted, i read all the chaps in a hr. today and didn't want to waste time by commenting on them BUT u r such an AMAZING author, this story is beyond words. period. I really couldn't rephase it any better, can't wait for more! :) |
8/7/2009 |
| Aniqua Apon |
put damien and emily together...
and I LUV THIS ARTICLE... |
8/7/2009 |
| Yara |
Umm... Well...
Maybe you could have Emily avoid Damien every time he tries to talk to her, and have this go on for a while... And then you could have Clare go over to Emily's and yell at her for like not leaving Damien alone and have her be generally nasty to her... And like maybe have Damien overhear her/ have Em's sister and mom overhear them and then maybe have them come up with a plan to help get Damien and Emily together?
I'm sure you'll make them have a lovely ending! =D
I absolutely love this story and I dont want it to finish though! =[ |
8/7/2009 |
| bryanna |
i would like that damien and emily would be together forever.
ps
i love ur story |
8/7/2009 |
| Kiki |
Perhaps crazy Clare could try to get rid of her in secret only to have Damien find out and save her...or she could save herself , something was mentioned about her being able to do something? I like your writing style and sorry for not commenting earlier |
8/7/2009 |
| Joanna H. |
Hi Ginger,
I think it would be interesting if Emily sees a future vision of herself (e.g. at Damien's boathouse where she also sadly realizes that Damien has been out of her life for years.) And then Emily decides that she has to tell Damien all her secrets before the separation happens. Perhaps Damien would be thinking the same thing, since every time they tried to confess to each other, some event interrupts them. So...Emily and Damien try to find each other, but Clare continues to disrupt Damien's search for some weird reason (while lying to Damien that Emily has been cheating on him with different guys). Heartbroken, Damien then runs to his childhood treehouse in the forest that Emily and he used to play in as little kids, and finds Emily crying inside. And then conflict and misunderstanding ensues before everything starts to clear up :D. Damien and Emily share their visions and secrets with each other, and realize that they were perfect for each other after all (like a dream come true). They finally end their confessions with a kiss.
After rekindling their love, Damien suddenly becomes suspicious of Clare, and wonders why Clare has become so possessive of Damien (to the point of lying to both Damien and Emily in doubleface). Emily points out that Clare doesn't even know anything about them, but acted as if she expected something from Damien. Right during their brainstorming session, Clare suddenly shows up at the treehouse, surprised to see Damien and Emily together. Clare starts firing derogatory insults at them again, but Damien defends Emily and calls Clare a demented liar. It was then that Damien sees beyond Clare's innocent and pretty facade, and realizes Clare's TRUE identity (tho I'm not sure who Clare would actually be). Perhaps Clare can be this evil witch who happened to lack vision-seeing skills...and she found that that in order to obtain the skill and consequently become the most powerful sorceress, she would have to marry Damien...
So after finding out about Clare's truth, Damien kicks Clare out of his life, while Clare regretfully apologizes for trying to take advantage of Damien and wishes Emily and Damien's future the best of luck. Clare then decides to abandon the 'witch' in herself, and become a normal girl again.
So finally, Damien and Emily can resume their romance free of any interruptions...UNTIL...Emily finds out that she is pregnant with Damien's baby. They then both share a simultaneous vision where they both see themselves as happy parents of a cute and very smart baby (who inherited Damien's vision seeing skills)...
wow, that was a long comment (my fingers almost fell off with the typing :D) , but it's just a simple idea for you to consider.
Regardless of how you choose to end the story, I have to applaud you for your brilliant writing skills and amazing characters. Secrets of His World is one of my favorite stories on Buzzle, and I'm sure you will find a great way to conclude the story!
Best Wishes,
Joanna H.
:) |
8/7/2009 |
| Latoya |
Its alright if you're stuck, it happens to everyone and the longer you take to figure it out the better it is when you write it up =]
I want Damien to find out what Clare said but maybe understand instead of getting angry and tell her he doesn't like her and he's in love with Emily but he'll forgive her if she tells Emily she was lying. And because Emily loves him so much it only takes her a little time to believe Clare. And then they get together! =]
Love your story and I'm gonna be sad that it's finishing =
xx |
8/7/2009 |
