I'm a survivor. Chapt, 1.

I could smell the burning flesh. I could hear the dying screams.
Comments on article "I'm a survivor. Chapt, 1."
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John Porter I really like what I have read Thanks much My eyes are not so good so I use a text to speach program to 'read' to me it is good too it is called Natural reader check it out! 8/11/2009
brookess g mwa haha.

i found you on the interwebs!
lol. hi hannah. you still are better than me. tihnking about putting up some stories dont know yet.

hmm.
xoxo.
loved it.		 7/25/2009
Chazza hannah? its charlotte. how the heck do u get stories up on buzzle? 7/23/2009
hermosa I like it. It is a bit sad though. But your writing and spelling skills are a lot better than some i've seen :) definatly keep writing! 7/16/2009
Floppy Disc Seems good so far. I like your writing style.
Will definitely continue reading!		 7/10/2009
Jess Not bad, but I would suggest watching your tense. You are mostly writing in present I can tell, but occasionally you write in past (not sure if you realized or not, I'm guilty of doing it too) I find reading your writings aloud to yourself helps with that, (as well as clarity and run-ons, lol). Have fun with it! 7/9/2009
ChaoticDamned its a wonderful idea...but it does need to have someone proof-read it for mistakes...but again very good 7/5/2009
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