Secrets of His World - Chapter 2
Read it :D Again, I don't know how to describe it lol. Please comment though:)
| Comments on article "Secrets of His World - Chapter 2" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Fran |
YOu've got me hooked! Love your story telling, can't wait to read more =) |
7/20/2009 |
| Brilla M. |
Yay!I amnumber 10!Ifell inlove with thisstory fromthe start!Keep writing! |
7/7/2009 |
| Allie |
Come on! Erin is totally a girls name. lol! Oh well. I think he's not really gay too
I think he's just pretending or maybe he's bisexual.
I want him and Emily to be together though :] |
7/5/2009 |
| NicoleButterfly |
liked it.
i like the gay guy the most...
rite now i think hes not really gay.
maybe hes bi?
i think he likes her but wnt admit to himself.
I also think erin is a girls name lol.
ppl normally change the spelling to aaron, but im just being picky lol.
w8n 4 ch3! |
7/5/2009 |
| Latoya |
Great story!
I don't really think that Damien is gay
I think that's why he doesn't want to sleep next to her anymore cuz he knows he won't be able to control himself
Also, i thought Erin was a girls name too, but i think he's getting too close to Emily than what is appropriate
Please don't make Emily a home wrecker!
Love this story =] |
7/5/2009 |
| dodo |
this is good, do you really have to wait until you get 10 comments? cause i really would like to read the next chapter and soon! lolz. hopefully you get 10 comments soon! |
7/5/2009 |
| HayLee |
Wow. I like this. But I thought Erin was a girls name lol. I guess it just depends, anyway it was great! Keep up the good work and bring on the next chapter! |
7/5/2009 |
| Mimi |
AWSOMENESS! i think that damien should come out and say that he really isn't gay: the only reason that he pretended to be gay was because she like his cousin and he thought she didn't like him: and when he find out that erin has a fiance he should express his true feelings! |
7/5/2009 |
| Delany B |
i realllly loved it i have to know what happens please consider getting another chapter in quickly...
oh doesn''t every girl want to lay in his arms. |
7/5/2009 |
| Phoebe |
I think you have a really good story line going, the only thing that confuses me is the name Erin, I always considered it to be a girl's name, my friend's called Erin! Lol! Other than that, I like it. |
7/5/2009 |
| Lina |
wow that had to be embarassing...he's engaged. :D love it *EEP* :D LOVE IT! |
7/4/2009 | |
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