A Big Change 1

This is a story I'm working on. The spelling and Grammar isn't perfect but I hope you like it. Please comment, so I know whether I should carry on with it. x x
Comments on article "A Big Change 1"
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hannah its pretty good. i like the fact that ellie isn't perfect like so many people try to make their cahracters out. sounds like it's gonna be a good story. keep writing! 7/5/2009
Jess Hey all, thanks for your votes! 7/4/2009
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