Unconcious Love

Anna has just broken up with her boyfriend Jake. Comment me if I should continue.
Comments on article "Unconcious Love"
Name Views and CommentsDate
rebby I don't know why I haven't seen this article before. I began reading it and was instantly entertained. I really enjoyed it and it seemed like you are a really good writer. I would really look forward in reading further chapters in your story. I think that you should keep on writing, you can do a hell of a lot good on this website. Even though it was just the first chapter it seemed like more because of the way you expressed yourself and the emotions conveyed by the characters. Please keep on writing I want to see what happens with Anna and post the next chapter as soon as possible :) 7/30/2009
NicoleButterfly like the beginning.
i cant believe she had a whole bottle.
for a moment i thought she wud burn her mouth from the smoking and alchohol lol.
i no im wierd.

continue plz :)
7/5/2009
Mimi CONTINUE PLEASE I WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO HER!
PLEASE LET HER GO BACK TO HER BF!
7/5/2009
Phoebe Definitely continue! I want to see where this story is going. It seems interesting so far! 7/3/2009
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