Unique~ Chapter 4

Brooke finally finds out what Kaleb really is...and who she is...Sorry if you aren't satisfied with what he is. It was the most unique thing I could think of that no one had really used yet and that was still kind of sexy. Sorry if you think I cut it short. (it's actually the longest one so far and I'll explain more in the next chapter) I was tired and I only get my inspiration at night. Please comment! ~
Comments on article "Unique~ Chapter 4"
Name Views and CommentsDate
unknown Omg I love the twist it's so unique. Keep the great work up 7/14/2009
Melanie Very interesting! I'm totally into it now. Can't wait for more! 7/4/2009
Writersblock Definitely NOT disappointed with what Kaleb is! It sounds really good to me, and I sure can't wait til the next one! I love it! Especially the fact that it's different. 7/4/2009
Shelby M. I love this! The fact that the grammer is practicly PERFECT, it has a lot of character, an you used something that is very rarely used. It makes the story amazing! Since Twilight came out all I've been hearing/reading about are vampires, and werewolfs, which dont get me wrong I love, but its gettig kinda overused, but this is phenomonal! 7/4/2009
Chad moregioxki Love It... Please Write More 7/3/2009
Erin write more! I love your story it really is unique! 7/3/2009
Lina i voted for the 1st one but wanted to vote for the 2nd too. lovin' this twist. :D haha lustful personalities...cracks me up every time 7/3/2009
Phoebe:p haha did so not see that coming. but happy he's not a vampire! good job! 7/3/2009
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