CARNIES! Chapter 11

OK so here it is. There's an epilogue coming if you leave me enough comments.
Comments on article "CARNIES! Chapter 11"
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Ap OMG! that is the most frightening way to end a cahpter. "ready to face the world. And my dad." facing fathers after sex -shudders-. lol. i love it! i cant wait for the epilogue. 7/3/2009
TD WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW!
An epilogue is a must have. And i agree with Sol, her getting pregnant - a whole other story.

Loveeeddd it :)		 7/3/2009
Sol i had thought that it was too early to end this story, but this was an AMAZING ending! you wrapped it up very well and you should DEFINITELY do the epilogue! but i dont think it should be of her getting pregnant or anything... that could be a whole other story itself
BUT THIS WAS STILL GREAT! :)		 7/3/2009
Phoebe Ahh Lina! The ending was perfect! You so have to do an epilogue to complete a great story. Well done! 7/3/2009
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