Maniacal

More of an over the top response to finding out your wife is cheating on you.
Comments on article "Maniacal"
Name Views and CommentsDate
Danielle that was pretty good, could have been better though. 11/13/2009
S too many swears... try thinking about using awesome description to tell the audience what the Man was like, instead of what he said... 10/22/2009
S This story was quite predictable. 10/22/2009
natedizzle Pretty sweet dude! 9/25/2009
dody i think its really good but then again i dont know much about wrighting but i do read alot 8/20/2009
Whooo cool! nice! 8/16/2009
Ashashashash. That was very well written. I very much enjoyed the writing style and the plot line of the story. Well done. 8/14/2009
jonathan yeh it so very cool 8/4/2009
Eva Wow, realy really good, espedially the fact that u didn't use any names, justs noons to describe the characters, i liked it very much, good job! 8/4/2009
A Crimes of passion makes an interesting storyline. 7/10/2009
Tru Wow, betrayal can make you go crazy 7/6/2009
I'm just sayin' You keep switching tenses. 7/6/2009
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