Well
Jake is a wonderful husband, but what lies beneath?
| Comments on article "Well" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Sara M |
it has an abrupt ending! |
11/9/2009 |
| tm |
This is sick! |
10/3/2009 |
| sheena |
Woah! i was reading this at school being bored. Pretending to be doing my work..but i had my facial expression with a dropped jaw the whole time I was reading this story. My gosh, this probably does happen in real life, its disgusting. Sick people like that are def. going to hell. |
10/2/2009 |
| Eliot |
Hey, Sam, how about correcting your own comments. The word, "Bad," alone does not serve as any type of introductory clause, and your usage of "much" is incorrect. Correction: There were too MANY spelling mistakes! |
9/15/2009 |
| sav.all4peace |
Dude... that was really disturbing. |
9/4/2009 |
| Makayla |
More details and finish writing it. I want to read more |
9/4/2009 |
| Linda |
great writing skill, I would like to read more from you :) |
8/28/2009 |
| Mark |
tnx Dude Now i have My idea,To Cr8 my HOmework.. |
8/3/2009 |
| Storkmy |
Wow that was demented and messed up. But very well plotted out. Probably could use a bit more detail |
7/29/2009 |
| Jen |
It was definitely a good story, it had potential, however I feel that the with a lot of the words spelled incorrectly that I concentrated on that more. I also think the description's were to repetitive, you used "he smiled, or he smiles" a lot and I think there should have been different types of reactions. |
7/24/2009 |
| ONDINE |
Wow that dude is sick! Does he die? |
7/20/2009 |
| Grimmore |
Very interesting idea, would make an interesting Short Film... |
7/17/2009 |
| Tru |
That's just sick...good writing though |
7/6/2009 |
| Sam |
Bad, I think that it needs to be edited! There were too much spelling mistakes! I feel that any five year old could spot them. |
7/3/2009 | |
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