Note from the Author of Red Skies
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| Comments on article "Note from the Author of Red Skies" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Lina |
I started reading your story. I like it. :) Urm...an idea...the jet CRASHES. They get stuck on an island...near the headquarters of the rebellion where everyone's getting ready for war. They have to pretend to be someone else, a married couple, perhaps? And find a way out of there before they find out who they are. Or something like that. I dunno. But I definitley think you should make your chapters longer. :) Lovin' the story, though. |
7/17/2009 |
| farida m |
come on, you can do it!
write something like
i couldn't fall asleep with him for long,but he fall asleep in what seem like secounds...
tell that she finally undertood that there is something more then just friendship to then. go deep, okay?
xx good luck |
7/12/2009 |
| Diplomat |
An idea would be if the two of them have to hide away on some island that nobody has ever heard of or some uncharted territory, but it is just the two of them in a deserted place with nowhere to go and they learn about each other...I can't wait to see what the next part of your story is! I am sure whatever it is will be fantastic! |
7/3/2009 | |
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