| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Paige |
late with my comments now but im catching up on the stories, this story is truly amazing i think =]] i know theres a few chapters left now to read and im sure things will be great by the end but its still exciting to know how they'll get there, cant wait to read the rest x |
7/30/2009 |
| Lindsey Rose |
Cameron, you idiot! Wake up! Ughhh, this story frustrates me to no end, but I love it anyways! |
7/14/2009 |
| Latoya |
Aww
That's so sad
She's really in love with him!
He's starting to drift away from her now, and he doesn't call her babe anymore!
I think the way you tell this story is so amazing and i'm always anxious to read the next chapter.
Keep on writing it, you make my day =] |
7/5/2009 |
| Mel |
Argg...Cam's such an idiot...but then again he's a guy...they are so much more slower when it comes to these things...I hope he realizes soon though, I hate how hurt Grace is over all this! |
7/2/2009 |
| Faith |
As always, so amazing! Loove the story, write more! |
7/2/2009 |
| moggy19 |
They get drunk and have sex.
Not original but could lead to some humourous dialogue. |
7/2/2009 |
| AMB |
OMG! I just thought of the best idea. you should make gracie get into a car accident or something that puts her into the hospital (not alchohol again) Maybe a drunk driver hits her on the sidewalk. She is in the hospital and cam comes to see her all upset. Cam sees the hairdresser in her room (she is unconcious) and e calls her petal. cam explodes on him screaming at him and asking why he calls her petal (jealousy!). Luella comes in and drags cam out of the room to yell at him. Luella has had enough of his cluelessness and screams at him. she tells him that gracie loves him and she wont tell him because she wants him to be happy and that since he likes madison, she wont ruin it. Cam is stunned and just walks away. The next day cam comes to the hospital when noone is there and just crys next to gracie. he realises that he lovess her too and that he gets soo upset when she is hurt because he cannot live without her. he just never noticed how much he needed her and how much it would hurt to loose her. ( dont make it cliche and have her wake up as soon as he eclares his love.) Madison comes in the next day to see cam by gracies bedside and tells him that she (madison) is his girlfriend not gracie. she tells him he should be spending time with her instead of sitting by the unconcious sl uts side. that pushes cam over the edge and he screams at her that gracie is not a sl ut and she(madison) is a bit ch and he breaks up with her. Gracie wakes up the next day ( not cliche) and... If you like my idea and want to hear more tell me in the next chapter, i have soo many more ideas if your interested. i just didnt want to write the whole thing down if you didnt like it. tell me what you think. |
7/2/2009 |
| Taylor |
awwww poor Gracie i feel so bad i hope when they hang out together he finally realizes shes the one another great chapter =] |
7/2/2009 |
| Zeviyane |
Aw! Thanks a lot Phoebe. It means a lot. And don't worry about my effort since it was worth doing it for you. I have actually been thinking about it (the chapter) and thought to share it with you. I am more than sure that you can dance the words along to make any emotion come out. YOU ARE SIMPLY THE BEST! have never seen anyone write as beautifully like this before. It would take all of heaven to come down to describe the angelic way you use to describe your characters. Honestly I almost cried seeing pathetic Gracie, Madison is really cruel. I seriously hope you have a jolt of surprise waiting for us, to decide further upon Cameron. Please keep posting, I am the #1 fan of yours. Like I said before and I always will, YOU ARE THE BEST. I await the dawn to read your stories.
Love Z |
7/2/2009 |
| rosabella marie |
i loved it! it was great! post soon!
but i dont like how gracie is like way below maddison like my best friend joseph told me no girl would ever come between us and we're best friends... but i see cams point hes not all mushy but i love your story but its like hes forgetting abot gracie =( but remember i love ur story! |
7/2/2009 |
| sarah |
Arghh just wanna kill madison but great chapter though love ur stories thnx waiting 4 the next soon ! |
7/2/2009 |
| divina |
this one made me cry:)
like
i love ur stories and please continue.i llike wake up everyday to read these. thank you
ly |
7/2/2009 |
| Me |
He should really see Gracie with someone, then he would know how that feels. To love someone, and have them not love u back in the same way, is really painful. What about Will... may be for her birthday, she invites Will with them or something. Seriously, I am dying to see them together. I absolutely hate Madison. Cam is so blind! But LOVE this story, you know I do. Keep the chapters coming. |
7/2/2009 |
| Tori |
Awwww! I can't wait for the next part! |
7/2/2009 |
| Phoebe:D |
omg! i hate madison. i think you should seriously kill her. i know yesterday when someone said that she isn't gonna stop at rejection. so you should kill her! lol jk! but i have another idea which idk if it's to late for that but maybe he should take her to las vegas for her birthday and they accidently get married. cuz they're drunk and all that. lol just still randomly giving ideas because that could still give at least a few more chapters. anyway just thought i'd throw that in there! love the story. don't end it any time soon!:) |
7/2/2009 |
| gianna |
aww theyre so adorable together...cameron is the best |
7/2/2009 |
| Memi |
wow fantastic chapter. love Cameron Gracie they are so cutee. cant wait to read more. |
7/2/2009 |
| KrazedKelley |
I cant take anymore of seeing madison in the story! arggh! hahaha |
7/2/2009 |
| Sally |
We want more... Plzzzzzzzz... You are one of the amazing n talented writers in buzzle...Your stories have been one of the fav that I been alwyas look forward to |
7/2/2009 |
| Didi |
Pls more.Ur an amazing writer.This is like watching a romantic comedy( U know what's gonna happen but u really wanna see it happen) Pls whatever d drag let Gracie n Cam end up together.Do keep up the good work.
Oh! I must say I enjoyed Planning Nate's Wedding.Ur such a wonderful writer.Thanks for keeping me busy during my leisure time. |
7/2/2009 |
| Ciriat |
That was amazing. I can't help to feel heartbroken for Gracie but absolute fantastic writing with the three kisses - did not see that happening. Can't wait to see where this goes. |
7/2/2009 |
| brown eye |
omygosh love the store i can't wait for the next chpt
pls write soon |
7/2/2009 |
| shan |
mmmmm...i can see where it's going
can wait for her birthday.. hope some romance happen there... |
7/2/2009 |
| Bella |
This is so sad);
Ughh I want CAM AND GRACIE:]]
LOL!
Luv this story,,
Ur a great writerr[: |
7/2/2009 |
| MINIMAN |
aww~. that was so depressing...i'm like crying ...seriously...wow...now i know what they mean by saying good authors make u feel same emotionally as the characters. FANTASTIC WORK PHEEBS~ I'M LOVING IT~ CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! AND I'M DEAD SERIOUS! |
7/2/2009 |
| Hannah |
rrrr tht was sad ! i hope he realsies sooon! still love this story ! xx |
7/2/2009 |
| asee |
wow... my heart is breaking for her again... and the waiting is killing me... ! |
7/2/2009 |
| Swetha |
Aww shucks.. mine wasnt the first one afterall .. i feel bad.. i thought this would happen as my laptop got stuck n so my comment got posted late. anyways... love ya |
7/2/2009 |
| Swetha |
wow .. great story .. really love it though its really sad like u said.. especially her not being able 2 tell him her love n for 2 see them walkin away... plz keep continuing.. .n once they confess their love 4 each other plz dont end their story abruptly.. which i know u never do but still im sayin as i want this story 2 last longer than ever... n i really wish this was a book so i oly ve 2 keep turnin d pages .. d wait 4 ur next story kills me... ur truly an amazin writer phoebe love ya... n ur stories... once they r together plz show more events of them enjoyin together... love ya once again.. n i think im the 1st commentator 4 this chapter.. n im so happy as i ve not been before... love swe |
7/2/2009 |
| Crissey |
I can't wait to see how Cam realizes what's in front of him, and also Madison's reaction when, and if, he chooses Gracie instead of her. Fan'freakin'tastic! |
7/2/2009 |
| nexi |
wow amazing dear.i love it.really u make my day.i hope u will publish next ch.soon. |
7/2/2009 |
| Sam |
Awww :(
This is superb :) |
7/2/2009 |
