Breaking Point (Chapter 1)
We all have a breaking point... a point when even the best of us can become capable of the darkest deeds... this is the story of one man who has reached that point.
| Comments on article "Breaking Point (Chapter 1)" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| jason henderson |
Will be intersting when the man says it his daughter who is dying. The child his wife died giving birth to. He spent most of her youth working away from home to put her through school so she wouldn't have to struggle. She has been his only reason for living for so long. She has sent him to church to save himself before she dies. Was more into the story imagining the first person as a female |
7/14/2009 |
| Crhistopher B |
thanks for the feedback, i'll be posting chapter two by the end of the week |
7/12/2009 | |
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