Le Loup Garou - Chapter One: And There He Was
Beth Benedict is just an ordinary girl who had to move to Maine to live with her father. Little did she know she was about to meet Noah Avery who happens to be a werewolf, and he's willing to do anything to keep that simple fact from Beth.
| Comments on article "Le Loup Garou - Chapter One: And There He Was" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Josie:) |
the next chapter should be up later on tonight, or tomorrow :) Sorry everybody. Thanks for the ideas :) |
10/21/2009 |
| Kiki |
ur still alive right : ( tel me if u stopping or going on |
9/11/2009 |
| Kitty |
I really liked the first except that you kinda rushed them when you made Noah introduce himself that fast but I really do like this one because you describe more in the beginning and it is amaizing, i really can't wait for the next chapter. You should try to use the ideas from the first one and use it for the rewrite. I think you can make Noah stuck being like Beths lab partner and then she introduces herself and he kinda just introduces himself but not in a good mood type of way and then they find out their perminet lab partners and slowly they graduly open up to each other.
I mean no offence, just trying to help...I hope I did. |
8/28/2009 |
| kim |
i like it! even though im a bit late in reading it. i thought it was great, please continue to write the story! |
8/21/2009 |
| Kiki |
GIVE US MORE |
8/11/2009 |
| Josie :) |
After dealing with computer problems galore :) I'm working on the rewriting the next chapter. I'm sorry it's taking so long. Please just be patient :) |
8/10/2009 |
| Kiki |
when are you going to continue? I really like this dont leave me hanging |
8/7/2009 |
| hannah |
heyI really like the start of your story
keep writing please! |
7/2/2009 |
| HeartsAndLove |
Eh, I'm not sure. |
7/1/2009 |
| Latoya |
It's interesting
But i detect a little bit of twilight in this
But it's still good
Keep writing it
=] |
7/1/2009 | |
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