Darkening Sky

This is the first chapter to the book I'm writing. It's VERY rough and I know that there are plenty of mistakes in it and that some things need to be rewritten. I don't think many people would copy and paste this and put it on another site, but just in case PLEASE DON'T COPY THIS!
Comments on article "Darkening Sky"
Name Views and CommentsDate
asia So far I really like this book I like the main character she seems likes she has the most perfect group of friends though other than that good job 7/15/2009
Mahitabelle I'm on chapter 13 as we speak and thank you for your support. 7/7/2009
DarkDragon Hey, this ain't bad! I like it, nice job! i think you should continue! =D you're a good writer, i hope to read some more of this soon!
-fellow writer		 7/6/2009
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