| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| love |
sweet! |
11/27/2009 |
| leesha |
awh! I loved it :)
Super Cute |
11/24/2009 |
| emma aleks |
so freakin awsome man!
keep writionmg youll be famous!
lol u will |
8/31/2009 |
| reika |
oww.. it was a cute n lovely story. hope u can come up with more stories. =) |
8/25/2009 |
| :)(: |
Aw! :) i've been saying this like every time i comment. :) but it's so cute! And romantic! :) good story! As for the quote. . I'm not sure i can help but i'll try! Love comes softly. Its not what your eyes see, but what your heart feels. Did that kinda help? You can change it a little he you want. :) i made the second part up. . He he :) good luck! :) |
8/20/2009 |
| Fibi |
so sweet!is it a true story...?overall i think its ok but too much talking gurl! u also got grammar error...maybe u wanna say his but u put her instead.but u know what?its damn CUTE! |
7/25/2009 |
| Teniel. |
i like this the over all story is wonderful it just needs slight corrections |
7/20/2009 |
| Neeraj |
Really a nice story
i luvd it |
7/11/2009 |
| nilesh |
love ur mistakes...becoz they feed u to good path |
7/8/2009 |
| Raka |
Amazing one...!
simply superb incident :-) |
7/2/2009 |
| Date doctor |
Good story though:-) |
7/1/2009 |
| Date doctor |
Thats not true love. That is just intamacy and lust. True love comes from God. Men respect women and have patience with the one they love. These days girls only think of love as intamacy. They find out that there is more to love than just intamacy when they get further in the relationship or even get married. Girls be careful dont hurt yourselves. |
7/1/2009 |
| se s |
awwwwwww that was a very sweet story |
7/1/2009 |
| CT |
Agree with phoebe, it is so lovely,nice,touch and more. with that, i want more! |
7/1/2009 |
| Phoebe |
Awww! I just read your story and it was so lovely! I hope you're writing some more stories. |
7/1/2009 |
| Sugar |
Nice and sweet. Love is sugar! |
6/30/2009 |
| Inuendo |
hey..nice..its short and complete and make me smile. |
6/30/2009 |
| Her |
i like this! |
6/30/2009 |
| Ika |
i love this...hey akma isn't that taylor ur crush? lol.. |
6/30/2009 |
| Vani |
it was really nice .. |
6/30/2009 |
| Incha |
hey...its kinda reality to me..almost the same..hehehe btw nice story.
according to my mom love is wonderfull |
6/30/2009 |
| Sally |
Love this story... beautiful love story... |
6/30/2009 |
| A |
oHHH..MY GOD, I LOVE IT.does it have a sequel,please2 make the sequel.. |
6/30/2009 |
| Renne |
Lisa is so lucky to have a love like this I wish my crush would hit me too! Love is unspeakable. |
6/30/2009 |
| GAGA |
Love is blind..that the qoute that i have btw you're on the right track.gimme more. |
6/29/2009 |
| ME |
hey..love it..more..more..more! |
6/29/2009 |
| Farrah |
hi Akma...your story is so good..i miss to see u at school well i have no idea for the quote as you are better in this than me, lol.. |
6/29/2009 |
| Melissa |
Love is everything?
Is it suitable?
Love your idea! |
6/29/2009 |
| Anny |
hi..emmm...quote i don't really know wnat but i want to say that i love this story so much.. |
6/29/2009 |
| Syahmi M |
Hey, why is it there two same name? Celeste? whatever. I like this, i love taylor..its nice. keep up. |
6/29/2009 |
| Celeste |
hi its nice. i love it. please make it more! |
6/29/2009 |
| Celeste |
hey, i love it! Please write more story like this! I want it, i want it! |
6/29/2009 |
