The Night It Rained in Mumbai

This story presents a claustrophobic and disturbing tale that unfolds in the suburbs of Mumbai one rainy night. What if one night you wake up to realize that something has gone wrong....terribly wrong? How will you face the worst enemy of the human mind..........Fear
Comments on article "The Night It Rained in Mumbai"
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Juaquin very good story..should be a writer 9/17/2009
ayesha oops. i didnt know the second part existed. will read when i have time. 9/6/2009
ayesha the begining is good, holds the reader in suspense, but ends in a much faster pace. i love the language though. 9/6/2009
Rayne cool. well written 7/2/2009
KMCite great piece of art ! 7/2/2009
Kanupriya Your writing skiils are indeed very good... 6/26/2009
Swati the story is goin gud... waiting for 2nd part.. to com up...also...abt suspense ...please dont open it soon... giv twist n turns to ur story...gud goin...:) 6/26/2009
Shalini Th story is pretty good... i hope you will post an ending to it soon :) 6/24/2009
aarti the story is good..but it definately needs the end for it...as iin where he was ? 6/24/2009
Amrita Maitra The author's vocab is just too impressive. The language holds you on thru the entire piece. There is a slight drag in the second para but that you cld say is a fault pointed out purposefully. 6/23/2009
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