Forbidden
Have you ever stumbled upon something that you knew you shouldn't have seen but couldn't look away? Well that's what happen to Karen and now they are after her.
| Comments on article "Forbidden" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Seth |
Really interesting story beginning. A little choppy for my taste but it really has potential. Not meaning to be rude, I'd suggest sentence structuring needs to be tweaked just a little. It would make it so much easier to read and understand. Once again I really enjoyed reading this story. Great job! |
11/5/2009 |
| Rosie D |
yes you definetly should... I have been waiting for you to write more |
8/29/2009 |
| lauren |
I think that the story is very good so far. but i alsso want to know way Karen is runing from the peole. but otherwise it is a great begining. |
6/22/2009 | |
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