My Love
A poem I wrote one day.
| Comments on article "My Love" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| ag |
My heart so found for the one I love.
His voice is like the angels whispering in tongue.
His eyes as green as the greenest evergreen.
A beautiful smile from his lips that seem to be in human.
The way he kisses makes me lose my breath.
He calls himself the devil but I see the gentle care in his eyes
Hearts entwined forever and ever. I am his angel forever never ending time as his mine. |
8/11/2009 |
| lexi |
i love ur poem but i thought i would make some changes to make it sound more better. and u dont have to use my ideas i jus thought it would help. when ever i make poems i love it when people give me advice to make it better so here u go.
my heart so found for the one i love,
his voice like the angels from up above.
his eyes an evergreen.
A beautiful smile i always love.
the way he kissed
made me melt away
he always takes my breath away
each and every day.
i always see the gentle and care in his eyes.
our hearts are one and entwined forever.
he says im his angel
and that i will be forever
with no ending time. |
7/15/2009 |
| Mahitabelle |
What's the big deal about this poem? It's the worse out of all the ones I've written |
7/10/2009 | |
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