Romance on the Dancefloor
This story is about Layla, a young talented dancer who’s struggling through life. I hope you guys like it. Please note that English is not my native language, so don’t mind the mistakes.
| Comments on article "Romance on the Dancefloor" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Cinnamint Spice |
I like your story. It seems to me as something fresh and different. Keep it up. No disrespect but a little more detail would be appreciated other than like your story is great! |
6/29/2009 |
| H |
I really enjoyed it! Please post the next one fast! Your English is definitely not as bad as you made it sound in the little intro thing! |
6/19/2009 |
| Ashley |
If you can get someone to proof read your work for the few slips than it would be perfect. Your very tiny mistakes are only barely noticable. I know people that were born speaking english and cant write in english as well, so just continue and dont worry about being nervous about your writing. |
6/19/2009 | |
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