Blood

What happens in a world where humans are not the strongest?
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Nickeeta No need to be so rude NC. But she does have a point, Gala. Your idea is really good, but maybe if the humans cant see bloods or they've gotten so used to them that hiding is pointless, then that would make sense why they walk around in the open.

Good Job! Keep it up!
-Fellow Author, here.		 10/7/2009
NC It's good but there are a few things I think that you need to change.
If humans are living in a world of flesh eating creatures they wouldn't be going to school or be out in the open. They would be hiding and concealing there identity and how can she just get on a d*mn bus when there are about 20 bloods chasing her, thats like a death sentence for the whole school or the people on the bus. If humans know of the creatures existance they wouldn't be out in the open, they would probably evacuate and hide. Duh!		 9/26/2009
Poppy Murray love it 8/8/2009
Blood YEah... i Would Love to REad the NExt pArt too...! 6/20/2009
DarkDragon Hey! I think you should continue! =) it sounds really cool, nice job! 6/19/2009
Chaos This is very awsome! it rocks XD! and i can't wait until you get the next part out. Very very good job. 6/16/2009
Fay I'm quite intrigued with the beginning chapter - do hope you will continue on with the story. 6/16/2009
meeth hey hey hey... please continue. this story is getting interesting:) 6/16/2009
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