Chapter 7 - Revisiting Bygone Days
Support and friendship at its best.
| Comments on article "Chapter 7 - Revisiting Bygone Days" |
| Name |
Views and Comments | Date |
| Nimanthika |
Thanks Floppy Disc, yea, you are right, I'll remember that when am writing the following chapters :) |
6/16/2009 |
| Floppy Disc |
I like the story, it has a nice flow to it.
But you should add some sort of conflict, that involves everyone, not just Tumi, so that it makes the story more interesting, not just 4 friends having fun.
Can't wait for chapter 8! |
6/14/2009 | |
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