Angels & Demons Chap 5

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Diplomat this sounds really really good...that stinks about your computer but I will def. read it when your computer is fixed...can't wait...I like how you set the story up and the scenarios, it may be short but it has a lot of stuff in it that makes it really interesting...and sometimes it is nice to take a break from the long stories :) 6/16/2009
KNS Im knda confused. sorry :s 6/16/2009
Ro u should put a lot more details into the story like what did the wings look like when they were coming in?
Then u could also talk about what they look like or give a pic of what u think they look like just to give the reader a clear picture
I hope im helping this should add some length to your story so good luck on the writing = ]		 6/15/2009
Marishka wow... i guess being an angel isn't all that fun.. well.. your a great writter... love the story :) 6/15/2009
Amrit Wow, LUV the way ur story is heading... could u try to fix ur grammer a tiny bit because it's kinda hard to read :) 6/14/2009
Black Rose The chapter is still to short and it needs a bit more discription. Other then that its really good and i hope that you continue to write it. 6/13/2009
CSI how old r they? 6/13/2009
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