Lucky Me...

This is my first story and I apologize if there are any spelling or grammar mistakes!
Comments on article "Lucky Me..."
Name Views and CommentsDate
Lily Tres Scott It says some bad words and i was going to show my kids this, but after i read it i changed my mind. Not the best plan to show kids who havn't heard bad words before . SORRY! FOR THIS REPORT OF THIS STORY 10/20/2009
Rose this is good 9/9/2009
addicted man i read this story ages ago...and i'm starting to reread it today...I WISH U FINISH! 8/4/2009
Floppy Disc Its good!
And to tell you the truth, I barely noticed any grammar or spelling mistakes.
The only thing is that you should separate the dialogue, when a new person starts to speak.
I will for sure continue reading! (if you keep writing, that is)
6/16/2009
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